打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar; reduce hesitation and filler words; use linking words and one clear reason followed by a brief example. Also correct tense and article use (e.g., "a typed message" -> "a typed message") and avoid repeating words.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I retain facts longer, and I enjoy sending handwritten notes to close friends because they feel more meaningful than a typed message.

建议: Improve grammatical structures and word choice; use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I use a laptop every day", "personal projects").

示例: I use a laptop every day because I’m studying computer science. Therefore I spend a lot of time coding and working on personal projects, so I’m on my laptop almost every day.

建议: Focus on accurate grammar and clearer sequencing of events; avoid missing words and incorrect forms. Start with a clear topic sentence about the time, then add two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "then"). Correct sentences like "I learned to type at age six" and "I remember seeing my mom".

示例: I learned to type when I was six years old. I remember seeing my mother using a computer at her dress shop, which made me curious, so she taught me how to type. After practicing a lot, I became quite good and felt proud of my progress.

建议: Be specific and correct vocabulary ("accuracy" not "currency"); avoid vague phrases and redundancy. Provide structured advice with linking words: state the main method, then give concrete examples and a brief reason.

示例: To improve typing I practice daily and focus on accuracy first. For example, I use online typing tests and exercises, and I concentrate on keeping my fingers in the correct positions; gradually this increases both my speed and accuracy.

× Personally I prefer handwriting because for me it felt more personal and helps me remember information better and I also enjoy sharing my handwriting to my closest friend because it felt more uh, meaningful rather than type message in in the chat.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because, for me, it feels more personal and helps me remember information better. I also enjoy sharing my handwriting with my closest friend because it feels more meaningful than typing messages in the chat.

Multiple preposition errors: use 'with' not 'to' for sharing something with someone, use 'in the chat' is okay but 'typing messages' requires 'typing' (verb) and plural 'messages'. Also tense consistency: 'felt' should be 'feels' to match present preference. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× Actually I'm using laptop everyday because I'm majoring in computer science and I'm spending a lot of time to do some exercise and courses such as coding and personal project.

✓ Actually, I use a laptop every day because I'm majoring in computer science and I spend a lot of time doing exercises and courses such as coding and personal projects.

Verb forms: 'I'm using' is awkward for habitual action; use simple present 'I use'. 'Everyday' as adjective should be 'every day' (two words) for frequency. 'I'm spending' should be 'I spend' for habitual action. 'To do some exercise' should be 'doing exercises' or 'doing some exercises'; 'personal project' should be plural 'personal projects' to match general activities.

× So I'm on my laptop like almost every day.

✓ So I'm on my laptop almost every day.

Extra word 'like' is informal and unnecessary here. Preposition 'on' is acceptable for using a device; removing 'like' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I learned how to type a keyboard when I was 6.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was six.

Use preposition 'on' with 'type on a keyboard'. Also use 'six' in words for small ages is preferred in formal speech, and past tense 'learned' is correct; only the missing preposition caused the error.

× I remember saw my mom working at her dress and I'm was curious how the keyboard works and then my mom showed me how after some practicing.

✓ I remember seeing my mom working at her desk, and I was curious about how the keyboard worked. Then my mom showed me after some practice.

Multiple structure errors: 'remember saw' should be 'remember seeing' (gerund after remember for past memory). 'Dress' should be 'desk'. 'I'm was' is incorrect — use 'I was'. 'How the keyboard works' should be backshifted to past 'how the keyboard worked' because the main verb is past. 'After some practicing' should be 'after some practice' or 'after practicing a bit'.

× I really good at typing at that time and I was proud of.

✓ I was really good at typing at that time, and I was proud of it.

Missing verb 'was' after 'I' corrected. Also add 'it' after 'proud of' to complete the phrasal verb. Tense 'was' matches the past time reference.

× I would say be curious and practice a lot if you want to become good at typing.

✓ I would say be curious and practice a lot if you want to become good at typing.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; 'be curious' and 'practice' are imperatives following 'I would say'. No change needed. (Included for completeness; meets allowed types but requires no correction.)

× It takes time for beginners to increase their speed, so doing daily exercise like online typing tests or focusing on your currency, it will help you improve a lot and more quickly.

✓ It takes time for beginners to increase their speed, so doing daily exercises like online typing tests or focusing on your accuracy will help you improve a lot and more quickly.

'Daily exercise' should be plural 'daily exercises' when referring to repeated activities. 'Focusing on your currency' is incorrect word choice; intended word is 'accuracy'. Also remove the redundant pronoun 'it' after the comma to correct sentence flow: combine clauses or use a semicolon. Kept tense consistent and clarified meaning.