打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your response more grammatically accurate, concise and add one specific reason with a linking word. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a brief example. Avoid redundant phrases and correct verb forms.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because my typing speed is quite slow. For example, when I take notes in meetings, I write by hand as it helps me think more clearly and capture ideas faster.

建议: Give a direct, concise answer and correct grammar. Use one linking phrase to explain why and include a specific task you do on the device. Avoid repetition (desktop/laptop confusion).

示例: Yes, I type on a desktop computer every day because I work as a nurse. For instance, I use the hospital desktop to update patient records and write reports.

建议: Answer directly with a clear time reference and improve grammar. Use a linking word to explain how you learned and give a brief specific example of what helped you improve.

示例: I learned to type mainly on the job about three years ago when I started nursing. At first I practiced while entering patient data, and over time regular use helped me improve.

建议: Be concise and more specific about the methods you used to improve. Use linking words and give an example of a practice or tool. Avoid vague phrases like 'better sense of typing' and 'I think that's perfect.'

示例: I improved my typing mainly through regular daily practice at work and using online typing exercises. For example, I spent 15 minutes each day on a typing tutor website and gradually increased my speed when entering patient notes.

× We personally prefer writing more than typing since that my typing speed were slow so I'm mostly choose handwriting over typing.

✓ We personally prefer writing to typing because my typing speed is slow, so I mostly choose handwriting over typing.

Errors: 'were' should be 'is' to match singular subject 'my typing speed' (third person singular present). 'I'm mostly choose' mixes auxiliary 'am' with base verb; correct is 'I mostly choose' or 'I mostly choose handwriting'. Also 'more than' is acceptable but 'prefer A to B' is more natural. Suggestion: Use subject-verb agreement for third person singular and avoid combining auxiliary 'be' with base verb unless forming a continuous tense.

× Also I feel that handwriting have more like feelings during your writing.

✓ Also I feel that handwriting has more feeling when you write.

Error: 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular noun 'handwriting' (third person singular). 'More like feelings' is awkward; use 'more feeling' or 'more emotion'. 'During your writing' is unnatural; use 'when you write'. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with singular nouns and choose natural collocations.

× Yes I do type on desktop every day since I my I'm work now working as a young nurse so I use the keyboard and the laptop desktop to do my nursing progression.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop every day because I am now working as a young nurse, so I use a keyboard and a laptop to do my nursing paperwork.

Errors: Extra words 'I my I'm' are incorrect; use single pronoun 'I' with correct auxiliary 'am'. 'Desktop' needs an article: 'a desktop' or 'a desktop computer'. 'Laptop desktop' is confused; choose 'laptop' or 'desktop computer'. 'Nursing progression' is unclear; 'nursing paperwork' or 'nursing tasks' fits better. Suggestion: Remove redundant pronouns, include appropriate articles, and use clear nouns for work-related tasks.

× To be honest I did not have a lot of opportunity to learn to type on the keyboard.

✓ To be honest, I did not have many opportunities to learn to type on the keyboard.

Error: 'a lot of opportunity' is unidiomatic; use plural 'many opportunities' with countable noun. The past tense 'did not have' is correct here. Suggestion: Match countable nouns with 'many' and use plural when referring to multiple occasions.

× So since my work was demand to use computer so I think I was learning during my working.

✓ Because my work requires using a computer, I think I learned while I was working.

Errors: 'was demand' is incorrect—use present 'requires' to state a job requirement, or past 'was demanding' depending on context; here use present simple for habitual requirement. 'Use computer' needs article: 'use a computer'. 'I was learning during my working' is awkward; use 'I learned while I was working' or 'I learned on the job'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms for requirements and natural time expressions for learning during work.

× I improve my typing skills during my work since I need to type a lot, so through a lot of practices and the work experience, I became more familiar to typing and have a better sense of typing.

✓ I improved my typing skills at work because I needed to type a lot; through a lot of practice and work experience, I became more familiar with typing and developed a better sense of it.

Errors: Tense inconsistency—start with present 'I improve' but later 'I became' past. Use past 'improved' if referring to past improvement. 'During my work' is better as 'at work'. 'A lot of practices' should be 'a lot of practice' (uncountable). 'Familiar to typing' should be 'familiar with typing'. 'Have a better sense of typing' is awkward; use 'developed a better sense of it'. Suggestion: Keep tenses consistent and use correct preposition 'familiar with' and uncountable 'practice'.

× I think that's perfect.

✓ I think that's great.

'Perfect' is grammatically acceptable but may be unnatural in this context; 'great' is more idiomatic. No major grammar error, but suggestion: choose a more natural adjective to express satisfaction.