打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and tense errors.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, when I message my family or friends I can type quickly and use autocorrect to fix mistakes, which saves time and improves clarity.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two concise supporting details. Use correct tense and linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Remove filler words and repetition.

示例: I type on my laptop every day because it is portable and faster than writing by hand. For instance, I use it to chat with friends and to write assignments quickly, so I can finish tasks more efficiently.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and a brief description of how you learned. Avoid filler words (uh) and unclear phrases. Use past tense consistently and name correct nouns (teacher, class).

示例: I learned to type when I was in grade 10. My computer teacher taught us in a practical class and gave us regular typing practice on the school computers, which helped me improve my speed.

建议: Explain a clear method for improvement with specific activities and linking words. Use present tense for routines and avoid vague statements like 'improve my passions.'

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly: I write essays, chat with friends, and use online typing exercises to increase accuracy and speed. As a result, my typing has become faster and less error-prone.

× I prefer typing because it was more easy and comfortable than anything.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easier and more comfortable than anything.

The sentence mixes present preference with past tense 'was' and uses incorrect comparative form 'more easy'. Use present tense 'is' to match 'I prefer' and comparative adjective 'easier'. Also place 'more' with 'comfortable' correctly as 'more comfortable'.

× When I message to my family or friends, it was easy to conversation with family or friends.

✓ When I message my family or friends, it is easy to have a conversation with them.

The phrase 'message to' is incorrect; use 'message' without 'to'. The clause mixes past tense 'was' with present habitual action; use present 'is'. 'to conversation' is wrong; use 'to have a conversation' or simply 'have a conversation'. Replace repeated 'family or friends' with 'them' for clarity.

× When I type any text I was I can correct, edit and correct them.

✓ When I type any text, I can correct and edit it.

This sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'was' and repeats 'correct'. Use present 'can' to match habitual action. Use object pronoun 'it' for 'any text' and list verbs without repetition: 'correct and edit'.

× I type on my laptop keyboard every day because it it was a more important to because it was easy for me to conversation with my friends and when I went to write anything with my laptop it was easier and faster also.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day because it is more convenient and makes it easier for me to communicate with my friends, and when I write with my laptop it is faster.

The original mixes tenses and has repetitions ('it it', 'because' twice). Use present tense 'is' for habitual actions. Replace awkward phrasing 'more important to' with 'more convenient' and 'conversation with my friends' with 'communicate with my friends'. Use consistent present tense 'write' and adjective 'faster'. Remove redundant words like 'also'.

× When I was in grade 10, uh, my computer T-shirts always teach me to type the keyboard, uh, in the in the complex class, my teacher always, uh, take me in the counter class to, to practice the keyboard.

✓ When I was in grade 10, my computer teacher always taught me how to type on the keyboard; in the computer lab my teacher always took me to practice typing.

Multiple errors: 'computer T-shirts' is wrong word choice and should be 'computer teacher'. 'Always teach' should be past tense 'always taught' to match 'When I was'. Use 'how to type on the keyboard' and correct 'complex class' to 'computer lab' or similar. 'Take me in the counter class' is incorrect; use 'took me to practice typing'. Ensure past tense consistency.

× I improved my typing like uh, write an essay and conversation with my friends with the messages, and I improve my typing, uh, to improve my passions. Also, it was very important for us.

✓ I improve my typing by writing essays and messaging my friends, and I practice to develop my skills. It is very important for us.

The student mixes past 'improved' with present and uses awkward phrases 'conversation with my friends with the messages' and 'improve my passions'. Use present simple 'improve' for habitual actions. 'Writing essays' and 'messaging my friends' are correct gerund forms after 'by'. Replace 'improve my passions' with 'develop my skills'. Change 'it was very important' to present 'it is very important' to match general truth.