打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid contradictions and incomplete sentences, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and neater. For example, I can edit text easily and back up my notes to the cloud, so I rarely lose them. Therefore, typing saves me time and reduces the chance of mistakes.

建议: Answer directly, use linking words and give a specific reason. Reduce hesitations and repeat information more precisely. Use one or two supporting details.

示例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually use my phone because most of my communication and study tasks are done through messaging apps. As a result, I rarely need a full keyboard.

建议: Provide a clear time reference or explain the situation. If you never learned, say so clearly and give a reason or brief detail. Avoid slang like 'drew messages' and reduce hesitations.

示例: I never formally learned to type on a full keyboard because I have always used my phone for texting. However, I became comfortable with touch typing on mobile keyboards over the past few years by using messaging and social apps every day.

建议: Give a specific plan with linking words and concrete steps. Use complete sentences and avoid trailing off. Mention methods, frequency, and expected outcome.

示例: I plan to improve my typing by practicing on a laptop for at least 20 minutes a day and using online typing courses. For example, I will complete exercises to increase speed and accuracy, and this should help me type assignments faster and more confidently.

× We just need your phone or laptop for typing.

✓ We just need our phone or laptop for typing.

The speaker refers to their own tools, so the possessive pronoun should be 'our' or 'my' rather than 'your'. Using 'your' incorrectly addresses the examiner. Suggestion: use 'my' if speaking about oneself alone or 'our' if including others.

× But in handwriting you.

✓ But for handwriting, you need a pen and paper.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Rewriting provides a complete clause matching the contrast with typing. Suggestion: always include subject, verb, and object to form a complete sentence.

× I don't type on desktop or laptop keyboard everyday.

✓ I don't type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day.

Missing articles 'a' before 'desktop' and 'laptop' and 'every day' should be two words. Use 'a' for singular countable nouns and write 'every day' for frequency. Suggestion: include articles for singular countable nouns and separate 'every day'.

× I usually use a phone because umm I don't have any work to do in desktop or a laptop.

✓ I usually use my phone because I don't have any work to do on a desktop or a laptop.

Preposition 'on' is required with devices (incorrect use of prepositions also). Also 'a phone' is better as 'my phone' for possession. Suggestion: use 'on a desktop' and 'on a laptop' and correct possessive pronoun.

× I only use phone to do text.

✓ I only use my phone to send texts.

Use 'send texts' or 'text' as a verb; 'do text' is incorrect. Also include possessive 'my'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'send' and plural 'texts' or 'text messages'.

× I told you I don't use keyboard, I just use phone and umm, I don't learn anything.

✓ I told you I don't use a keyboard; I just use my phone, and I haven't learned formal typing.

Missing article 'a' before 'keyboard' and 'use phone' needs 'my phone'. 'I don't learn anything' is unnatural for past learning — present perfect 'haven't learned' or 'never learned' is better. Suggestion: use articles and appropriate tense for learning experiences.

× I just drew messages and use social media.

✓ I just write messages and use social media.

'Drew messages' is incorrect because drawing is wrong verb; 'write' or 'type' is appropriate. Verb tense should match present habitual action: 'write' and 'use'. Suggestion: use 'write' or 'text' when referring to composing messages on a phone.

× I can improve my typing to sending message to do my assignments on a laptop and.

✓ I can improve my typing by sending messages and doing my assignments on a laptop.

The original mixes infinitive and gerund forms incorrectly and ends abruptly. Use 'by' + gerund to express means of improvement and parallel gerunds 'sending' and 'doing'. Suggestion: use 'by' with gerunds and keep parallel structure.