打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够清晰并且有较多语法与表达错误。建议先用一句简洁的主题句直接回答问题（例如：I prefer handwriting.），然后用1–2句具体且相关的支持细节说明原因，注意句子结构与连接词（because, as, so）并避免重复。练习时可把模糊表达（like “temperature” 或“certainly moved”）换成更准确的词（e.g. feelings, emotions）。

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me express my emotions more clearly. For example, when I write by hand I can add little notes or doodles that show how I felt, which I can't do as easily when typing.

建议: 回答缺乏条理且有许多不自然的短语。建议先直接回答（e.g. No, I don't use a computer every day.），随后用一两句具体原因并用连接词衔接（because, so, therefore）。避免含糊表达，说明具体活动（reading books, taking notes）和原因（eye strain）。

示例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day because I prefer reading real books. For example, I find screens strain my eyes, so I usually study from printed books and write notes by hand.

建议: 回答包含必要信息但语法和时态混用，表达不够流畅。建议用一句清晰的主题句说明时间（I learned to type when I was 12.），接着用一句补充细节说明学习方式和结果，使用正确时态和自然短语（attended a typing class, received a certificate）。

示例: I learned to type when I was 12. I attended a typing class at school and after the course I received a certificate for my typing skills.

建议: 回答意思可以理解但句子冗长且语法有误。建议先给出直接回答（e.g. I improve my typing by practising regularly on a computer.），然后用一两句具体说明练习方式（chatting with friends, doing homework, using typing apps）并使用连接词（for example, by, which helps）。注意用单数/复数和动词形式的一致性（accuracy）。

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly on a computer. For example, I chat with friends online and type my homework and documents, which helps increase both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because people will put their temperature, their mood and what they feel and what their certainly moved on their on their words.

✓ I prefer handwriting because people can put their feelings, moods and what they want to express into their words.

句中代词使用混乱（their, what their, on their on their），导致意思不清。建议用明确的名词短语（their feelings, moods, what they want to express）替代重复且错误的代词结构。这样句子更简洁且语义明确。

× So I think it's good for us to have handwriting.

✓ So I think handwriting is good for us.

原句中 'have handwriting' 的搭配不自然，属于代词/名词搭配错误。将其改为更自然的表达 'handwriting is good for us'。建议多使用常见搭配而不是字面直译。

× Not really because I usually use the book.

✓ Not really, because I usually use a book.

原句中缺少不定冠词 'a' 导致量词使用错误（一个书）。应在可数名词单数前加不定冠词 'a'。中文建议：在单数可数名词前加冠词或其他限定词。

× I don't use any computer or iPad, that digital dis device.

✓ I don't use a computer or an iPad — that digital device.

原句中缺少冠词且拼写错误（dis, device）。可数单数名词前需用不定冠词 'a' 或 'an'（在/i/音前用 'an'）。此外用破折号或从句连接更自然。建议注意冠词使用和拼写。

× I think it's very it hurt my eyes and the real book is good for me to write the title or write the other.

✓ I think it hurts my eyes a lot, and a real book is better for me to write titles or other notes.

原句中形容词/副词使用混乱（very it hurt），语序错误且搭配不当。应使用正确时态和副词位置（it hurts my eyes a lot），并用复数或复合名词 (titles, notes) 表达泛指。建议学习副词修饰动词的位置和名词复数形式。

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 12 years.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was 12 years old.

关于过去时间的表达，短语 '12 years' 需要加 'old' 来表示年龄。建议在说年龄时使用 '... years old'。

× I go to I went to the class is for student to learn how to type on the keyboard and I also got a certificate paper.

✓ I went to a class for students to learn how to type on the keyboard, and I also received a certificate.

原句时态混用（I go to I went to），结构混乱且名词搭配错误（certificate paper 不常用）。建议统一使用过去时 'went'，在可数名词前加冠词，并用 'received a certificate' 更地道。

× So now I usually use computer to contact with my friends or use computer to do my homework or some document so that can improve my typing speed and the correct.

✓ So now I usually use a computer to contact my friends or to do my homework and some documents, which can improve my typing speed and accuracy.

原句中介词和动词搭配错误（contact with my friends 应为 contact my friends），缺少冠词（a computer），并且句尾 'the correct' 不完整，应为 'accuracy'。建议注意介词搭配（contact + 人）和名词选择，以及完整表达目的和结果。