打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence plus two specific supporting reasons. Reduce fillers (umm, uh) and avoid repetition about grammar/spelling. Use linking words (because, while, for example) and correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'much convenient' -> 'much more convenient', 'writing by hand usually requires').

示例: I prefer typing because it is much more convenient and helps me check grammar and spelling automatically. For example, when I write emails or lesson plans I can use spellcheck to avoid mistakes. While handwriting can be more personal, it usually requires neater penmanship and more careful spelling, so I type most of the time.

建议: Start with a direct, concise answer (desktop or laptop) then give one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I work as a childcare assistant', 'I prepare lesson plans', 'it requires a lot of computer work'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and avoid repetition.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work as a childcare assistant and I need to prepare lesson plans and learning materials. As a result, I spend several hours each day typing documents and activities for the children.

建议: Give a clear time reference and concise supporting details. Correct grammar and awkward phrases ('primary school', 'computer lessons', 'an exam required us to type 120 characters per minute', 'I practiced all summer'). Avoid exaggerated or unclear numbers unless sure.

示例: I learned to type in primary school when I was about eight or nine. During computer lessons we had an exam that required typing 120 Chinese characters per minute, so I practiced every summer to improve my speed and pass the test.

建议: Be specific and use correct vocabulary ('chat' instead of 'doors', 'type quickly' instead of 'typing speedy'). Explain clearly how gaming helps (real-time chat, practice under pressure) and give one more method you use (typing tutors, timed exercises). Remove fillers and keep within 2–4 sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by playing online games where I must chat quickly with teammates, which trains me to type fast under time pressure. I also use online typing tutor websites for drills that focus on accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing because it is much convenient for me, it can help me to do the grammar check and I don't have to worry about my spelling and also my grammar.

✓ I prefer typing because it is much more convenient for me; it can help me check grammar, and I don't have to worry about my spelling or my grammar.

'Much convenient' is incorrect; comparative adverbs require 'much more convenient' or 'far more convenient'. 'Help me to do the grammar check' is wordy; use 'help me check grammar'. Use 'or' instead of 'and also' to link two related items (spelling or grammar). Use a semicolon or conjunction to join independent clauses for clarity.

× Umm in comparison, umm white.

✓ In comparison, writing by hand...

The sentence fragment 'umm white' is unclear and appears to be a mispronunciation of 'writing'. Restore the intended word and complete the sentence. Avoid filler words like 'umm' in written responses.

× Writing by hand is uh, usually require you to spell all the words correctly and also it's required.

✓ Writing by hand usually requires you to spell all the words correctly, and your handwriting is required to be neat.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'Writing by hand' is a singular gerund phrase, so use 'requires' not 'require'. The clause 'it's required' is vague; specify what is required (neat handwriting). Avoid filler 'uh'.

× So that's why I have to keep making some Lesson plan or doing some learning materials for the kids.

✓ So that's why I have to keep making lesson plans or preparing learning materials for the kids.

'Lesson plan' should be plural 'lesson plans' to match 'keep making' (ongoing repeated actions). 'Doing some learning materials' is unnatural; use 'preparing learning materials'. Capitalization of 'Lesson' is incorrect.

× So it's required me a lot of work on the computers and I have to type it through the laptop keyboards every day.

✓ So it requires me to do a lot of work on the computer, and I have to type on a laptop keyboard every day.

'It's required me' is ungrammatical; use 'it requires me to do'. Use singular 'computer' or 'computers' consistently; 'work on the computer' is idiomatic. 'Type it through the laptop keyboards' is awkward; use 'type on a laptop keyboard'.

× I learned it when I was in primary schools because in when I was young in my primary school, there was a computer lessons and one of the examination as you have to type like 120 words in Chinese every minute.

✓ I learned it when I was in primary school because when I was young there were computer lessons, and one of the exams required you to type about 120 Chinese characters per minute.

Use singular 'primary school' or 'primary schools' consistently; 'I was in primary schools' should be 'I was in primary school'. 'There was a computer lessons' needs subject-verb agreement: 'there were computer lessons'. 'One of the examination as you have to' is incorrect; use past tense 'one of the exams required you to'. '120 words in Chinese every minute' is likely '120 Chinese characters per minute' — clarify unit and use past tense.

× So I just keep practicing for the whole whole summers and then in order to achieve a higher score is in the examination.

✓ So I kept practicing throughout the whole summer in order to achieve a higher score in the exam.

Tense consistency: the action happened in the past, so use 'kept practicing' not 'just keep practicing'. 'Whole summers' is incorrect for a single period; use 'the whole summer'. The phrase 'is in the examination' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'in the exam'.

× I try to improve my typing speed and accuracy by playing games with my friends because in the game you have to communicate with your friends using your doors.

✓ I try to improve my typing speed and accuracy by playing games with my friends because in the game you have to communicate with your friends using your words.

'Using your doors' is a miswording; the correct prepositional/word choice is 'using your words'. This corrects the semantic error.

× So I have to keep typing speedy and then uh, to make sure that OK is my friends know what I'm thinking about and we have a better, umm, team works in the game.

✓ So I have to keep typing quickly to make sure my friends know what I'm thinking and that we have better teamwork in the game.

Use adverb 'quickly' instead of adjective 'speedy' to modify the verb 'typing'. Remove filler 'uh' and 'OK is'. 'My friends know' should be 'my friends know' without 'is'. 'Team works' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun 'teamwork'.