打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your response more direct and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise supporting details with specific reasons. Avoid unnecessary words and hesitations and correct small grammar issues (e.g., “as a teacher” not “for as a teacher”).

示例: I prefer handwriting. As a teacher, I find writing with a pen or pencil in a notebook more comfortable and faster for making notes and corrections. Also, I feel I retain information better when I write by hand.

建议: Be concise and avoid filler words. Begin with a direct answer, then give one clear reason and a brief contrast if needed. Remove repeated phrases and hesitations.

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because it is convenient for emails and lesson plans. However, I still prefer writing in a notebook for drafting ideas since it feels more natural and helps me organize thoughts.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and reduce repetition. State when you started, mention the method briefly, and describe one specific benefit. Avoid hesitations and informal phrasing like “year back”.

示例: I started learning to type about a year ago. I took an online course and used a typing app to practice regularly, which improved my speed and accuracy significantly.

建议: Answer directly and give specific details about the practice routine or features of the app. Use linking words to make the explanation coherent and avoid repetition of short phrases.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing on a typing app that offers lessons and timed exercises. For example, it teaches proper finger placement, gives feedback on accuracy, and tracks my progress, so I practice for 20 minutes a day to increase my speed.

× I do prefer handwriting because it's habitual and for as a teacher it's easy for me to write using pencil and or a pen with a book.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is habitual, and as a teacher it is easy for me to write with a pencil or a pen in a notebook.

The original sentence has several preposition and article errors: 'for as a teacher' should be 'as a teacher' (remove extra preposition), 'write using pencil and or a pen' should be 'write with a pencil or a pen' (use 'with' for instruments and choose 'or' without 'and'), and 'with a book' is better as 'in a notebook' for clarity. Also simplify 'I do prefer' to 'I prefer' for naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'as' to indicate role, 'with' to indicate the instrument, and choose the correct noun ('notebook') and articles ('a').

× Yes, I do write on my laptop every day.

✓ Yes, I write on my laptop every day.

Using 'do' with the simple present is unnecessary here. 'Do' is used for emphasis or in questions; in a plain declarative sentence use the simple present 'I write'. Suggestion: Remove auxiliary 'do' unless emphasizing ('I do write' for contrast).

× The keyboard is soft and easy to use and uh, uh, it's convenient, but definitely I prefer to write on my notebook.

✓ The keyboard is soft and easy to use, and it is convenient, but I definitely prefer to write in my notebook.

Use 'in' rather than 'on' for writing inside a notebook. Also reorder 'definitely' to a natural position and replace contraction 'it's' for clarity in speech. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Place adverbs like 'definitely' before the verb 'prefer' or after auxiliary verbs: 'I definitely prefer' or 'I prefer to write in my notebook.'

× I would say I'm still learning how to type on a keyboard, but definitely, uh, uh, year back I took a course of, uh, how to write.

✓ I would say I am still learning how to type on a keyboard, but about a year ago I took a course on typing.

The phrase 'year back' is nonstandard; use 'about a year ago'. 'A course of how to write' is awkward; use 'a course on typing' or 'a typing course'. Maintain consistent present progressive 'I am still learning' and past 'I took' for the completed course. Suggestion: Use 'about a year ago' for time reference and 'course on' + topic for clarity.

× It's an app. I use that app to practice my writing and I'm still learning, but it's, uh, that helped me a lot.

✓ It is an app. I use the app to practice my writing, and I am still learning, but it helped me a lot.

Use consistent articles: 'the app' (referring back to 'an app'). The clause 'it's, uh, that helped me a lot' mixes tenses and pronouns; change to 'it helped me a lot' (past simple) because the help occurred when using the app. Also keep 'I am' for ongoing learning. Suggestion: Maintain clear reference with 'the' after first mention and match tense between clauses.

× As I mentioned in the previous question, I'm using an app which helps, uh, to make you type easier.

✓ As I mentioned in the previous question, I am using an app that helps make typing easier.

The original mixes second-person 'you' with first-person context; use a neutral or gerund form: 'helps make typing easier'. Also 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in defining relative clauses, and infinitive 'to make you type easier' is awkward. Suggestion: Use gerund 'typing' and keep pronouns consistent with the speaker.

× It gives uh, it gives me instruction what to use when, like in quality keyboard, how uh, we have to put our fingers and start writing.

✓ It gives me instructions on what to do, such as how to place our fingers on a proper keyboard and start typing.

Several issues: 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'; use 'on' after 'instructions' ('instructions on what to do'); 'what to use when' is unclear—replace with 'what to do'; 'in quality keyboard' is incorrect—use 'on a proper keyboard' or 'on a quality keyboard'; 'we have to put our fingers' better as 'how to place our fingers'; 'start writing' is better as 'start typing' in this context. Suggestion: Use plural 'instructions', preposition 'on', and consistent verb 'typing' for keyboard practice.