视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and article use, and avoid repetition. For example, say why you enjoy landscape photos and how you use them.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing natural scenes because they help me relax and remind me of places I’ve visited. For instance, I keep a gallery of landscape photos on my phone and often look at them when I need to unwind.

建议: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid unclear phrasing and unnecessary repetition. Include one concrete example to make the answer more vivid.

示例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is more peaceful and the air feels fresher. For example, I enjoy walking along quiet trails and photographing rolling hills and streams, which helps me feel relaxed and refreshed.

建议: Answer directly and correct grammar (articles, plural/singular, verb forms). Explain why with one clear reason and, if possible, mention a brief comparison. Avoid vague references like 'natural resources televisions'.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because I haven’t traveled abroad yet, so I’m more familiar with the scenery here. Also, the landscapes I see in films and on TV often resemble the places near my hometown, so they feel more familiar and comforting.

× I would like to take the picture of different views because I love keeping the natural photos on my gallery as well as to relax with those beauty I really appreciate and allowed it to keep those pictures for a long time.

✓ I would like to take pictures of different views because I love keeping natural photos in my gallery; they help me relax and I really appreciate their beauty, so I like to keep those pictures for a long time.

Errors: incorrect article and singular/plural (Grammar Problem Type IDs 1 and 22), wrong prepositions (ID 11), incorrect pronoun and verb forms ('those beauty' should be 'their beauty') (ID 12), and awkward phrasing. Primary issue: misuse of plural and articles and an inappropriate verb form 'allowed it to keep' which should be rephrased. Suggestions: use plural 'pictures', use 'in my gallery' not 'on', replace 'those beauty' with 'their beauty', and simplify 'allowed it to keep those pictures' to 'I like to keep those pictures' or 'I keep those pictures for a long time'. Ensure sentences are split or punctuated for clarity.

× I would like to prefer the rural areas because those astonishing views are really mesmerizing as well as relaxed with calm and fresh mind to those who have not been into the rural areas. Miss those beauties plus I love it.

✓ I prefer rural areas because their astonishing views are really mesmerizing and make people feel calm and refreshed; I miss those beauties and I love them.

Errors: incorrect use of phrases and quantifiers (ID 14), incorrect adjective/adverb use (ID 13), pronoun/reference errors (ID 12), and sentence structure problems (ID 26). 'I would like to prefer' is incorrect — use 'I prefer'. 'Relaxed with calm and fresh mind to those who have not been into the rural areas' is ungrammatical; express as 'make people feel calm and refreshed' or 'help me feel calm and refreshed'. 'Miss those beauties plus I love it' should be 'I miss those beauties and I love them.' Suggestions: use simple present 'I prefer', match pronouns in number and gender ('them' for plural 'beauties'), and restructure clauses for clarity.

× I prefer to views on my own countries because I never been to another countries. Also the landscape are similar and those natural scenarios and beauties that I have seen in the movies or any natural resources televisions are similar to my country compared it.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I have never been to other countries. Also, the landscapes are similar, and the natural scenes and beauties I have seen in movies or on nature documentaries are similar to those in my country.

Errors: incorrect verb tense and form (ID 6 and 5), singular/plural and article errors (IDs 1 and 22), incorrect prepositions (ID 11), and sentence structure issues (ID 26). 'I prefer to views' should be 'I prefer views' or 'I prefer to view', 'my own countries' should be singular 'my own country'. 'I never been' needs present perfect 'I have never been'. 'Another countries' should be 'other countries'. 'The landscape are' should be 'the landscapes are' or 'the landscape is'. 'Natural resources televisions' is incorrect; use 'nature documentaries' or 'natural-resource TV programs', and 'compared it' is unnecessary. Suggestions: use proper present perfect for life experiences, match singular/plural nouns and use correct prepositions: 'in my country', 'on nature documentaries'.