视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Focus on grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences. For example, say: “Yes, I enjoy photographing different views.” Then add a reason and a brief example, using correct verb forms and connectors.

示例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, when I travel I always bring my camera because I like capturing landscapes and city scenes. This makes trips more memorable, and I often share the best photos with friends.

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms). Use a topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Replace fillers (uh, um) with pauses and avoid vague phrases like “and so on.”

示例: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because they make me feel more relaxed. For example, the southern suburbs near my hometown are surrounded by trees and low hills, so I enjoy walking and taking photos there.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then explain briefly with a reason and a future intention. Correct grammar (articles, plural forms) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like however or but to show contrast.

示例: I currently prefer views in my own country because I have not traveled abroad yet. However, I would like to visit other countries in the future to photograph different landscapes and cityscapes.

× Yes, of course I like take picture of different views.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb requires the -ing form ('taking'). Also 'picture' should be plural ('pictures') because 'different views' implies multiple images.

× For instance, I often go to travel with taking my camera.

✓ For instance, I often travel with my camera.

The phrase 'go to travel' is incorrect; use 'travel' or 'go traveling'. 'Taking' is unnecessary when 'with my camera' already indicates possession. Alternatively, 'go traveling with my camera' would be acceptable.

× Yeah, it is favorite.

✓ Yeah, it is my favorite.

'Favorite' requires a determiner such as 'my' when referring to something personal. Without it the sentence is incomplete.

× So I just exciting to taking the picture in different.

✓ So I am just excited to take pictures in different places.

'Exciting' is the present participle meaning 'causing excitement'; the correct adjective for the speaker's feeling is 'excited'. Use 'to take' (infinitive) after 'excited to' and 'pictures' plural. Also add 'places' to complete the phrase.

× Uh, in my case I prefer to, I prefer rural area to urban area.

✓ Uh, in my case I prefer rural areas to urban areas.

When comparing general types of locations use plural nouns: 'rural areas' and 'urban areas'.

× Uh, southern suburb area can makes me more uh relaxed because they are surrounded by some trees and mountains and so on.

✓ Uh, southern suburban areas can make me more relaxed because they are surrounded by trees and mountains.

'Can' should be followed by base verb 'make', not 'makes'. Use adjective form 'suburban' and plural 'areas' to match 'they'. 'Some' is unnecessary; 'surrounded by trees and mountains' is more natural.

× It is good for me.

✓ It is good for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× It is difficult question because I have never traveled other countries so I just answer I prefer to my country but I want to go travel uh other other countries and I want to take picture pictures in the different views.

✓ It is a difficult question because I have never traveled to other countries, so I would say I prefer my country, but I want to travel to other countries and take pictures of different views.

Several errors combined: 'a difficult question' needs article 'a'. Use 'traveled to other countries' with preposition 'to'. 'I just answer I prefer to my country' is incorrect: use 'I would say I prefer my country'. 'Go travel other countries' should be 'travel to other countries'. 'Take picture pictures' is redundant; use 'take pictures of different views'. The corrections address article use, prepositions, tense/modal use ('would say'), and pluralization.