视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and fluency: use correct verb forms, articles, and complete sentences; reduce repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences. Add one specific example to make content richer. Use linking phrase to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I do. I have been interested in photography since childhood because my mother used to take many photos, and growing up I learned a lot from her. For example, last summer I spent a weekend photographing coastal sunsets, which helped me practice composition and lighting.

建议: Increase clarity and avoid disfluencies: remove filler words and hesitations, use linking words to contrast preferences, and provide one concrete reason or example for each preference. Keep answer concise (2–4 sentences).

示例: It depends on my mood. When I am stressed, I prefer rural scenes because the calm landscapes help me relax; however, when I feel energetic I enjoy urban views, such as lively streets and cafés, because they inspire and energize me.

建议: Avoid repetition and be more specific: remove duplicated phrases, use linking words to explain reasons, and give a short, specific example of a favorite local view. Keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Generally I prefer views in my own country because we have a wide variety of landscapes, from mountains to beaches. For instance, I love photographing the coastal cliffs near my hometown because of their dramatic light at sunset.

× I have a lot interest in photography since my childhood because my mother also take a lot of pictures and.

✓ I have had a lot of interest in photography since my childhood because my mother also took a lot of pictures.

Errors: missing 'of' in 'a lot of interest', tense consistency with 'since' requires present perfect 'have had', and 'take' should be past 'took' to match 'since my childhood'. Suggestion: Use 'a lot of' with a noun, use present perfect for actions or states continuing from the past ('have had'), and match verb tense for past habitual actions ('took').

× because my mother also take a lot of pictures and.

✓ because my mother also took a lot of pictures.

Error: verb form 'take' does not agree with the third person singular subject 'my mother'. Suggestion: Use past tense 'took' for a past habitual action; remove the trailing 'and' to complete the sentence.

× When I feel more stressed or depressed, I like to look at some, some at at some nature scene maybe.

✓ When I feel stressed or depressed, I like to look at nature scenes.

Errors: repeated words ('some, some at at some'), awkward phrasing and unnecessary 'maybe'. Suggestion: Remove repetitions and simplify to a clear plural noun 'nature scenes' when speaking generally.

× But if I feel good and energetic, I like to look at pictures of the city, of people of.

✓ But if I feel good and energetic, I like to look at pictures of the city and of people.

Errors: incomplete phrase 'of people of' and comma misuse. Suggestion: Complete the parallel list with 'and of people' or 'and people' for clarity.

× In general, I prefer the views from my country from my own country, because in my country there are a broad range of different types of views, like forests or mountains or beaches.

✓ In general, I prefer the views from my own country, because in my country there is a broad range of different types of scenery, like forests, mountains, and beaches.

Errors: redundant phrase 'from my country from my own country', incorrect 'there are a broad range' (number agreement), and word choice 'views' repeated. Suggestion: Remove redundancy, use singular 'there is a broad range' or 'there are many', and use 'scenery' for natural views; use commas in lists and 'and' before final item.