视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và dùng ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: 'take pictures' not 'take picture', 'views' not 'reviews'). Nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sau đó đưa một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Hạn chế lặp từ và sửa lỗi so sánh/so sánh hơn ('better than' cần có đối tượng so sánh).

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each scene gives me a new composition to try. For example, I often use foreground elements to make the landscape more interesting, and I adjust the lighting to capture the mood.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác (ví dụ: 'urban areas are better' hoặc 'I prefer urban areas'). Tránh dùng từ sai nghĩa như 'puzzle' và cụm 'feel hotter' — nên nói rõ ý là 'more lively' or 'more exciting'. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể và một liên từ để kết nối ý. Giữ độ dài dưới 5 câu.

示例: I prefer urban areas because they are livelier and offer more interesting photo opportunities. For instance, city streets have diverse architecture and busy markets, which add energy and variety to my shots.

建议: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn về lý do và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (phải thêm 'born and raised', 'I prefer views in my own country'). Tránh câu vụn; dùng một hoặc hai câu bổ sung cụ thể với từ vựng chính xác ('monkeys' thay vì 'monkey'). Nên nêu lý do cảm xúc hoặc ví dụ rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and meaningful to me. For example, I often visit the local zoo near my hometown, where I photograph monkeys and other animals against natural backgrounds.

× Yes, I love to take picture of different reviews because in all the views I can make my picture more beautiful and make the landscape there with the background will be more better than.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because in each view I can make my picture more beautiful and the landscape in the background will look better.

Sử dụng động từ + -ing: 'love to take' is acceptable but 'love taking' is more natural with 'pictures'. 'picture' should be plural 'pictures'. 'reviews' is incorrect word; use 'views'. 'in all the views' -> 'in each view' for clarity. 'make the landscape there with the background will be more better than' is ungrammatical; rephrased to 'the landscape in the background will look better'. Remove redundant comparative 'more better'. Suggestions: use 'love taking pictures', use plural nouns when general, avoid double comparatives.

× From my perspective, urban area may be more better because urban area brings more hustle and puzzle of city life and make me feel hotter than rural area.

✓ From my perspective, urban areas may be better because they bring more hustle and bustle from city life and make me feel hotter than rural areas.

Sử dụng tính từ/adverb: 'more better' is incorrect (double comparative); use 'better'. 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'puzzle' is wrong word; correct phrase is 'hustle and bustle'. Subject-verb agreement: after changing to plural, use 'they bring'. Use parallel comparison 'hotter than rural areas'. Suggestions: avoid double comparatives, use correct idioms, ensure plural for general statements.

× I was born raised in Palo city so I prefer views in our country.

✓ I was born and raised in Palo City, so I prefer views in my country.

Cấu trúc câu: 'born raised' needs coordinating conjunction 'and' as 'born and raised'. 'Palo city' should be 'Palo City' and proper nouns capitalized. 'our country' is inconsistent with 'I'; use 'my country' for personal preference. Suggestion: use 'born and raised' and consistent possessive pronouns.

× For example, I what I have visited the local zoo near my hometown.

✓ For example, I have visited the local zoo near my hometown.

Chủ-vị-động từ: the phrase contains an extra word 'what' that breaks the sentence; remove 'what'. Use present perfect 'I have visited' correctly to indicate experience. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary filler words and use correct perfect tense for experiences.

× They have many animals like monkey.

✓ They have many animals, like monkeys.

Số ít và số nhiều: 'monkey' should be plural 'monkeys' when referring to animals in general. Also add a comma before 'like' for clarity. Suggestion: use plural nouns when listing examples of many animals.