视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “look after it” and “if I miss this place.” Use correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms).

示例: Yes, I do. I find photographing different views very relaxing because it helps me focus and forget my worries. For example, when I take photos of a park or a sunset, I concentrate on composition and colours, which calms me down and creates lasting memories.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Correct grammar (use plural/singular and comparative structures properly) and avoid vague phrases like “very more exposed.” Add an example to support your preference.

示例: I prefer rural views because they are closer to nature and generally quieter. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields and forests where there is natural light and less noise, which makes the scenes more peaceful and visually appealing.

建议: Make the answer grammatically correct and specific. Start with a clear statement, then explain why with concrete details and a linking word. Replace unclear phrases like “I catching” and “we have a fresh” with precise vocabulary (e.g., 'scenic', 'fresher air').

示例: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are very scenic and the air feels fresher. For example, our coastal areas and mountains offer striking colours and clean air, which I find more comfortable and familiar than many foreign cities.

× Taking picture in different views help me to release my stress.

✓ Taking pictures of different views helps me to relieve my stress.

Use the gerund 'Taking' correctly with plural 'pictures' and the verb after the subject must agree: 'Taking pictures... helps' (singular subject). Also 'help me to release my stress' is unnatural; use 'relieve my stress'. Suggestion: Use plural form for countable nouns after gerunds and ensure subject-verb agreement (gerund phrase is singular).

× This is because when I take picture, I'm able to look after it, look after it.

✓ This is because when I take a picture, I can look at it and appreciate it.

Use the correct article 'a' with the singular countable noun 'picture'. 'Look after' means to care for someone/something; intended meaning is 'look at' or 'appreciate'. 'I'm able to' is wordy; 'I can' is more natural. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('look at') and appropriate verbs for intended meaning; include articles for singular countable nouns.

× So if I miss this place, it's really helpful for me.

✓ So if I miss this place, these photos are really helpful for me.

Sentence is unclear: 'miss this place' likely means 'miss being at this place' and the subject that is 'really helpful' should be 'these photos' (from previous context). Clarify reference and ensure pronouns refer to a clear noun. Suggestion: Make clear what 'it' refers to; repeat noun if necessary.

× For me I like view in rural area because it's more to nature compared to the urban area which only has a lot of building which is very more exposed to.

✓ For me, I like views in rural areas because they are closer to nature compared to urban areas, which have many buildings and are more exposed.

Use plural forms ('views', 'rural areas', 'urban areas') for general statements. 'More to nature' is incorrect — use 'closer to nature'. 'A lot of building' should be 'many buildings'. 'Very more exposed to' is ungrammatical; use 'more exposed'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general preferences and correct quantifiers ('many') and comparative structures ('closer to', 'more exposed').

× For me I like view in rural area because it's more to nature compared to the urban area which only has a lot of building which is very more exposed to.

✓ For me, I like views in rural areas because they are closer to nature compared to urban areas, which have many buildings and are more exposed.

Missing articles before singular nouns ('a view', 'a rural area') and inconsistent article use. In general statements prefer plural without articles or use articles appropriately for singular. Also remove unnecessary articles before 'urban area' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use plural forms for generalizations or include the correct article for singular nouns.

× I enjoy view in my country because it is really I catching because it's closer to nature and we have a fresh.

✓ I enjoy the views in my country because they are really eye-catching, they are closer to nature, and we have fresh air.

Many issues: 'view' should be plural or 'the view'; 'it is really I catching' is ungrammatical — intended 'eye-catching'. 'We have a fresh' is incomplete; likely 'fresh air'. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('they are') when referring to 'views'. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives ('eye-catching') and complete noun phrases ('fresh air'); keep pronoun agreement consistent.

× which only has a lot of building which is very more exposed to.

✓ which have many buildings and are more exposed.

'adjective/adverb misuse: 'very more' is incorrect — use 'more' or 'much more'. 'a lot of building' should be 'many buildings'. Also change verb to plural 'have' to agree with plural noun. Suggestion: Use correct quantifier 'many' with countable nouns and proper comparative forms ('more' or 'much more').