视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ปรับประโยคให้เป็นไวยากรณ์ถูกต้อง ใช้โครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและประหยัดคำ เพิ่มรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น อธิบายว่าคุณชอบถ่ายวิวประเภทไหน และเหตุผลเพิ่มเติม ใช้ linking word เล็กน้อยเพื่อความเป็นธรรมชาติ ตัวอย่างจุดที่ต้องแก้: 'I like to taking' → 'I like taking' และควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำอย่าง 'around the world' ถ้าไม่ได้หมายถึงทั่วโลกจริง ๆ

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking landscape photos when I travel because they remind me of the places I visited. For example, I like photographing mountain ranges at sunrise because the light and colors are very memorable.

建议: ตอบให้ตรงกับคำถามก่อน (เลือกเมืองหรือชนบท) แล้วขยายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน ใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำเชื่อม (for example, because, such as) แทน 'definitely yes' ซึ่งไม่ตอบคำถาม และแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'a natural or a views' → 'natural views such as...'

示例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy photographing natural scenes, such as mountains, rivers and fields of flowers. For example, I often wake up early to capture mist over a valley because it creates a peaceful atmosphere in my photos.

建议: ตอบชัดเจนว่า 'both' ได้ แต่ต้องอธิบายเหตุผลเป็นประโยคที่อ่านง่าย แก้คำผิดและไวยากรณ์ (e.g. 'I have trial many provinces' → 'I have travelled to many provinces'; 'a natural views' → 'natural views'; 'another countries' → 'other countries') ใช้ linking words เช่น 'on the one hand', 'on the other hand' เพื่อจัดโครงสร้างตอบ

示例: I prefer both. On the one hand, my own country has many provinces I have travelled to with beautiful natural views worth photographing. On the other hand, I enjoy taking pictures abroad because different cultures and landscapes give me fresh perspectives.

× I like to taking pictures when I'm traveling around the world because I would like to keep it as a memory.

✓ I like taking pictures when I'm traveling around the world because I would like to keep them as memories.

Error type: using 'to' with a gerund. After 'like' we use either 'like to do' or 'like doing', not 'like to doing'. Also 'pictures' is plural so refer with 'them' and 'memories' should be plural to match multiple pictures. Suggestion: use 'I like taking' or 'I like to take', and match pronouns and count nouns accordingly.

× Definitely yes, because I like to take a picture of a natural or a views of mountains, river, even flowers.

✓ Definitely yes, because I like to take pictures of natural scenes like mountains, rivers, and even flowers.

Error type: incorrect singular/plural forms and article usage. 'a picture of a natural' is incomplete and incorrect; 'views' is plural but preceded by 'a'. Also 'river' should be plural when listing types. Suggestion: use plural 'pictures' and plural nouns 'mountains, rivers' or rephrase to 'a picture of a natural scene'.

× I would prefer both because like in my country I have trial many provinces and there are a lot of places that I could take a picture of a natural views, but in another countries like I'm saying I like to travel.

✓ I would prefer both because in my country I have traveled to many provinces and there are a lot of places where I can take pictures of natural views, and in other countries I also like to travel.

Multiple issues: incorrect prepositions and verbs. 'like in my country' is awkward; use 'in my country'. 'I have trial' is wrong verb form; use 'I have traveled to'. 'places that I could take a picture of' should be 'places where I can take pictures'. 'another countries' should be 'other countries'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('in', 'to'), correct verb forms ('traveled'), and relative words ('where') and match singular/plural.