学校— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, mentioning the name and location of your school, and express your feelings in a natural way. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

示例: My school is the University of Science and Technology, which is one of the top-ranking universities in my country. I really enjoy studying there because it offers excellent facilities and a supportive learning environment.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Make sure to directly answer the question and provide specific reasons why you like your school, using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I like my school very much because it has excellent infrastructure, such as air conditioning and modern classrooms, which make learning comfortable and enjoyable.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with specific examples of how the school helps you improve your skills and knowledge. Use linking words to organise your ideas.

示例: Yes, I believe my school is a great place to study because it helps me develop my technical skills and gain knowledge in various fields, which prepares me well for my future career.

建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks organisation. Try to separate your ideas about the natural environment and the educational environment, and use linking words to connect your points logically.

示例: My school is surrounded by beautiful natural scenery, including a peaceful forest park, which makes the environment very relaxing. Moreover, the teachers are very supportive and knowledgeable, which creates a positive learning atmosphere.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but is not expressed clearly. Try to use correct grammar and vocabulary, and explain your points with specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: In my opinion, having an interest in your studies is very important because it motivates you to work hard. For example, I find it helpful to create a study schedule and focus on subjects I enjoy, which makes learning easier and more effective.

× Now I have an academic journey in University of Science and Technology which is one of the top ranking university in handling.

✓ Now I have an academic journey at the University of Science and Technology, which is one of the top-ranking universities in handling.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'in University' instead of 'at the University' and 'university' should be plural 'universities' to agree with 'one of the'. Also, 'top ranking' should be hyphenated as 'top-ranking'. This is a 'There be issue' because of incorrect article and plural usage with 'there is/are' implied.

× An I feel so great when I when learning at the school.

✓ And I feel so great when I am learning at the school.

The sentence uses 'An' instead of 'And' and misses the auxiliary verb 'am' before 'learning'. This is an 'Incorrect conjunction use' because 'An' is a misspelling of 'And' and the sentence structure is incomplete.

× Definitely, I rely on my school.

✓ Definitely, I rely on my school.

No correction needed here as the pronoun usage is correct.

× When I was a kid I also said that I get that going to my school an one of reason is their infrastructure which is so top notch with stereo.

✓ When I was a kid, I also said that I liked going to my school and one of the reasons is their infrastructure, which is top-notch with stereo.

The sentence has 'an one of reason' which should be 'one of the reasons'. Also, 'get that going' is unclear and corrected to 'liked going'. This is an 'Incorrect use of quantifiers' because 'one of reason' lacks the article 'the' and plural 'reasons'.

× Air conditioner and also with. The.

✓ Air conditioners and also with the.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Air conditioner' should be plural 'Air conditioners'. The phrase 'and also with. The.' is incomplete and needs clarification. This is an 'Incorrect conjunction use' due to incomplete sentence and improper conjunction.

× Definitely, just as I mentioned with you then Masco is a greatest university in handle an also when learning at the school.

✓ Definitely, just as I mentioned to you, Masco is a great university in handling and also when learning at the school.

The sentence uses 'then Masco is a greatest university' which should be 'Masco is a great university'. 'Greatest' is superlative and needs comparison context. 'in handle' should be 'in handling'. This is a 'There be issue' because of incorrect article and verb form usage.

× I feel so great about my technical technical skill and also improve much of my own diversity in novelty knowledge in a wealth of aspects, chest technique, tech.

✓ I feel so great about my technical skills and also have improved much of my own diversity in novel knowledge in a wealth of aspects, such as technical techniques.

The sentence repeats 'technical' and uses 'novelty knowledge' which should be 'novel knowledge'. 'Chest technique, tech' is unclear and corrected to 'such as technical techniques'. This is 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' due to repetition and incorrect adjective use.

× Regarding nature, my school have a bunch of streets and when going to school I feel that I must myself in the tranquility of the Forest Park and also regard to the education.

✓ Regarding nature, my school has a bunch of trees and when going to school I feel that I immerse myself in the tranquility of the Forest Park and also regarding education.

The sentence uses 'my school have' which should be 'my school has' (subject-verb agreement). 'streets' is likely a mistake for 'trees'. 'must myself' is incorrect and corrected to 'immerse myself'. This is a 'Singular and plural issue' and 'Subject-verb agreement errors'.

× Teacher I mean I support in my school is so great they passed down the use.

✓ The teachers, I mean the support in my school, is so great; they pass down the knowledge.

The sentence is unclear and uses 'Teacher I mean I support' incorrectly. Corrected to 'The teachers, I mean the support'. 'passed down the use' is corrected to 'pass down the knowledge'. This is 'Incorrect use of pronouns' and 'Sentence structure errors'.

× In my opinion, I think that the interesting study can promote student to study hardly about subject they learn on school.

✓ In my opinion, I think that interesting study can promote students to study hard about the subjects they learn at school.

The sentence uses 'interesting study' instead of 'interesting studies' or 'an interesting study'. 'student' should be plural 'students'. 'study hardly' is incorrect; it should be 'study hard'. 'subject' should be plural 'subjects'. 'learn on school' should be 'learn at school'. This is 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' and 'Singular and plural issue'.

× Anne also that the way to find interest is not too tough for me.

✓ And also, the way to find interest is not too tough for me.

'Anne' is a misspelling of 'And'. This is 'Incorrect use of conjunction'.

× I think that I can set a schedule and also to go from in the subject.

✓ I think that I can set a schedule and also follow through in the subject.

The phrase 'go from in the subject' is incorrect. It is corrected to 'follow through in the subject' to make sense. This is 'Incorrect use of prepositions'.