学校— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: My school is a high school located on the outskirts of a busy city in Vietnam. It is very quiet and peaceful there, which helps me focus on my studies.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

示例: I enjoy studying, but I don't like my school because the facilities are poor and the environment is not very good compared to other schools in my country.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý kiến của mình.

示例: Unfortunately, I don't think my school is a good place to study because the facilities are poor. For example, many devices and equipment are broken, which makes learning difficult.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để mô tả môi trường học tập.

示例: The environment at my school is not very good. It is not suitable for children because it can affect their ability to study well.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích tầm quan trọng của sự hứng thú trong học tập và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: For me, interest is very important in studying because when you like a subject, you feel happier and more motivated to learn it.

× Although the CDE very birth link during the day.

✓ Although the city is very busy during the day.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' to correctly form the 'there be' structure indicating existence or state. 'CDE' seems to be a typo or unclear, replaced with 'city' for clarity.

× My school is located in located on the outskirts so it is very quiet serene because so it had been focused on my stuff.

✓ My school is located on the outskirts, so it is very quiet and serene because it is focused on my studies.

The phrase 'located in located on' is redundant and incorrect. 'On the outskirts' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'had been focused on my stuff' is unclear and corrected to 'focused on my studies' for clarity and correctness.

× I love studying but the choice is I don't like my school because they all the devices on my school in very bad an environment in here so then good than the many screwed in my country.

✓ I love studying but the choice is I don't like my school because all the devices in my school are in a very bad environment here, so it is worse than many schools in my country.

The sentence has multiple plural and singular agreement issues: 'they all the devices' should be 'all the devices', 'in very bad an environment' corrected to 'in a very bad environment', and comparison corrected to 'worse than many schools'.

× I love sorry but unfortunately I don't like my school very much because the facility are poor and environment in our very compatible.

✓ I love studying but unfortunately I don't like my school very much because the facilities are poor and the environment is not very comfortable.

'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' to match 'are', and 'environment in our very compatible' is incorrect; corrected to 'environment is not very comfortable' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, many devices and equipment are broken which might be difficult to learn an comparing to add.

✓ For example, many devices and equipment are broken, which might make it difficult to learn compared to others.

The phrase 'difficult to learn an comparing to add' is incorrect. Corrected to 'difficult to learn compared to others' to properly use prepositions and comparative structure.

× Oh my God, the environment in my soon a very bad and it it doesn't compatible for the children and so that it'll it'll have the chewing a study matter an.

✓ Oh my God, the environment in my school is very bad and it is not suitable for children, so it will have a negative effect on studying.

'Soon' is a typo for 'school', 'doesn't compatible' should be 'is not suitable', and the rest of the sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For me, I love story so the most important in studying the hobbies you can find a hot the most happy the. Subject you like most and study issue.

✓ For me, I love studying, so the most important thing in studying is to find the subject you like most and enjoy it.

The sentence has unclear pronoun use and structure. Corrected to clarify meaning and proper pronoun and noun usage.