学校— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的介词和时态，使表达更流畅。

示例: I attended a school near my house from elementary to high school, but now I study at a university in Taipei.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意单复数形式。

示例: Yes, I like my school because it has a playground for running and exercising, and a library where students can study.

建议: 句子结构不清晰，词汇使用不准确。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构，避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it offers many facilities such as a swimming pool, library, and gym, which help students develop their interests in various fields.

建议: 回答中存在词汇错误和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，描述环境时更具体。

示例: My school has a spacious playground in the center of the campus, four teaching buildings, and a library next to the swimming pool. The campus is quite large.

建议: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用正确的词汇。

示例: Interest is very important in studying because without it, students may feel frustrated by poor grades. However, if they are interested, they will be more patient and motivated to learn.

× I used to go to the school which near by my house from the elementary school to Senior High School, but I study university in Taipei.

✓ I used to go to the school which is near my house from elementary school to Senior High School, but I study at university in Taipei.

句中“near by”应改为“near”，因为“near”是形容词或介词，表示“靠近”；“nearby”是副词或形容词，不能直接用在定语从句中。此外，“study university”缺少介词，应为“study at university”。

× Yes, I like my school. It provides another place for student to run and do exercise and also provides library for students to study.

✓ Yes, I like my school. It provides another place for students to run and do exercise and also provides a library for students to study.

“student”应为复数“students”，因为指的是一般学生群体；“provides library”缺少冠词，应为“provides a library”。

× Yes, I see my school is a good place to study. It's over many public facilities like swimming pool, library and the gym for students to development their interests on many field.

✓ Yes, I see my school is a good place to study. It has many public facilities like a swimming pool, a library and a gym for students to develop their interests in many fields.

“It's over many public facilities”表达不当，应改为“It has many public facilities”；“development”应为动词“develop”；“interests on many field”应为“interests in many fields”，介词和名词复数形式错误。

× There was a spacious playground in the century of campus and four building of teaching and a library linked to a swimming pool. It's quite a big compass.

✓ There was a spacious playground in the center of the campus and four teaching buildings and a library linked to a swimming pool. It's quite a big campus.

“century”应为“center”，意思是“中心”；“four building”应为复数“four buildings”；“compass”应为“campus”，意思是“校园”。

× If the students study without interest, they might feel frustrating when they get bad academic performance, but if they fail with interest, they will feel patients are learning.

✓ If the students study without interest, they might feel frustrated when they get bad academic performance, but if they study with interest, they will feel patient while learning.

“feel frustrating”应为“feel frustrated”，因为“frustrated”是形容词描述人的感受；“fail with interest”表达不当，应为“study with interest”；“feel patients are learning”语法错误，应为“feel patient while learning”，表示“感到耐心”。