学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为完整，但句子结构稍显简单，且信息表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用更自然的连接词，避免重复表达时间信息。

示例: I am currently a student. I just graduated from high school and will start my studies at Fudan University this September.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且句子冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并补充具体细节使表达更清晰。

示例: I will study at Fudan University starting this September. It is well known for its excellent academic atmosphere and professional faculty.

建议: 回答内容重复且表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富细节以增强说服力。

示例: Yes, definitely. Fudan University is one of the most prestigious universities in China, offering a strong academic environment and experienced teachers who support students well.

建议: 回答较为简单且缺乏细节。建议尝试表达自己的期待或假设，增加内容丰富度。

示例: Since I haven't started university yet, I can't say for sure. However, I hope the university will provide more student activities and better facilities.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且信息混乱。建议理清思路，使用正确的词汇和时态，明确表达学习计划。

示例: I plan to complete my general education courses in the first two years. My major is big data science and data analysis, and in the last two years, I want to focus more on advanced math and computer science courses.

× I will pursue my university study in Fudan University this September and I think Fudan University is not only a well known study with good academic atmosphere but also a very professional university for me to.

✓ I will pursue my university studies at Fudan University this September, and I think Fudan University is not only well known for its good academic atmosphere but also a very professional university for me.

句中“study”应为复数形式“studies”，表示大学学习的多个方面；“in Fudan University”应改为“at Fudan University”，因为表示在某个大学学习通常用介词“at”；“well known study”表达不准确，应为“well known for its good academic atmosphere”，更符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, of course, as Fudan University is one of the most well known and prestigious university in China.

✓ Yes, of course, as Fudan University is one of the most well known and prestigious universities in China.

“one of the most well known and prestigious university”中“university”应为复数“universities”，因为“one of the”后面应接复数名词。

× It has very good academic atmosphere and also professional teachers and educators for us.

✓ It has a very good academic atmosphere and also professional teachers and educators for us.

“academic atmosphere”前缺少冠词“a”，因为“atmosphere”是可数名词，表示“一种氛围”，需要冠词。

× Well, actually I have to go into the university after September, so now I can't give you exact answers to this question.

✓ Well, actually I have to go to the university after September, so now I can't give you exact answers to this question.

“go into the university”表达不自然，通常说“go to the university”表示去大学。

× I plan to finish my primary school work in the first two years.

✓ I plan to finish my primary coursework in the first two years.

“primary school work”表达不准确，应该用“primary coursework”表示大学前两年的基础课程。

× My major is big data science and data analysis and I wanted to learn more about math and computering in the last two years of the university and I may.

✓ My major is big data science and data analysis, and I want to learn more about math and computing in the last two years of the university, and I may.

“wanted”时态错误，应为现在时“want”，因为表达的是未来计划；“computering”不是正确单词，应为“computing”。