学习— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误，如“major in”应为“majoring in”，“allow”应为“allows”。此外，句子结构应更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

示例: I'm currently a student majoring in product design because I have a strong passion for creativity. I enjoy how this field allows me to combine creative ideas with practical problem-solving skills. For example, I like designing innovative solutions that address real-world changes and help people.

建议: 回答中表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，如“GoPro of nice classmate”不合适，应使用更准确的表达。建议简化句子，突出重点，避免冗余。

示例: I study at Zhejiang International University, where I enjoy a peaceful campus life. The friendly classmates, kind teachers, and my humorous roommate always cheer me up, so I really enjoy living here.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，如“well equipped”应为“well-equipped”，“wide range of work”表达不准确。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，且细节描述更具体。

示例: Yes, our school is a good place to study because it has a well-equipped library with a wide range of books and digital resources, which help students find materials easily. Moreover, the quiet atmosphere allows me to concentrate better. For example, the comfortable study rooms help me finish assignments efficiently.

建议: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，如“was too hard to sit”应为“is too hard to sit on”，重复词汇“always always”应避免。建议表达更简洁自然。

示例: I would like to change my chair because it is too hard to sit on. When I sit for a long time, my back feels uncomfortable. Therefore, I hope the chairs can be replaced with more comfortable ones.

建议: 回答中表达不准确，如“always interest in biological behind the service”不清楚。建议用更准确的词汇和句子结构表达兴趣和计划。

示例: I plan to study service design abroad because I am always interested in the principles behind services. I believe studying service design will suit me well and help me deepen my knowledge in this field.

× I really enjoy how this field allow me to combine my creative idea with practical problem solving skill.

✓ I really enjoy how this field allows me to combine my creative ideas with practical problem-solving skills.

主语是单数"field"，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"allows"。"idea"和"skill"应使用复数形式，因为表达的是多种创意和技能。

× I like design innovations, solutions that can address the real world change and help people.

✓ I like designing innovations, solutions that can address real-world changes and help people.

动词"like"后应接动名词"designing"表示喜欢做某事。"change"应为复数"changes"，表示多种变化。

× I mean the GoPro of nice classmate and kind teacher and my roommate are so humorous that I always can cheer me up, so I really enjoy life here.

✓ I mean the group of nice classmates, kind teachers, and my roommate are so humorous that they can always cheer me up, so I really enjoy life here.

"classmate"和"teacher"应使用复数形式，表示多位同学和老师。"GoPro"应为"group"。代词"I always can cheer me up"结构错误，应改为"they can always cheer me up"。

× Yes, our school is a good place to study because it has well equipped library with wide range of work and digital resources that help people to find material easily and the atmosphere there is quiet which can help me concentrate better on my study.

✓ Yes, our school is a good place to study because it has a well-equipped library with a wide range of books and digital resources that help people find materials easily, and the atmosphere there is quiet, which helps me concentrate better on my studies.

"library"前应加不定冠词"a"。"wide range"前应加不定冠词"a"。"work"应为"books"更合适。"help people to find material"中"to"可省略。"study"应为复数"studies"。

× For example, they are comfortable study room which have finished assignment efficiently.

✓ For example, there are comfortable study rooms which help finish assignments efficiently.

"study room"应为复数"study rooms"。"have finished assignment"结构错误，应改为"help finish assignments"。

× I think I might want to change my chair because the chair was too hard to sit and when I sit for long day my back was always always feel uncomfortable.

✓ I think I might want to change my chair because the chair is too hard to sit on, and when I sit for a long day, my back always feels uncomfortable.

描述现在情况应使用现在时。"was"改为"is"，"feel"改为"feels"。"sit for long day"应为"sit for a long day"。

× So I think I might want to change the chairs to have a comfortable seat.

✓ So I think I might want to change the chair to have a comfortable seat.

前文提到的是单数"chair"，此处应保持一致，使用单数。

× I plan to study service design abroad because I always interest in biological behind the service.

✓ I plan to study service design abroad because I am always interested in the biology behind the service.

"interest"应使用被动形式"interested"，并且需要助动词"am"。"biological"应改为名词"biology"。

× I believe service design is suitable for me and will help me deepen my knowledge in this field.

✓ I believe service design is suitable for me and will help me deepen my knowledge of this field.

"deepen knowledge in"应改为"deepen knowledge of"，表示对某领域的知识加深。