自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. In Part 1 you should answer directly with a short topic sentence and, if helpful, add one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, avoid repetition, and limit to up to 5 sentences. For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add a brief detail and a reason or short example.

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it to school with my friends. Because our neighborhood was safe and flat, I could practice often and soon became quite confident.

建议: Your answer answers the question but has grammatical errors, hesitations and unclear phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and one specific supporting detail introduced with a linking word (for example, “because” or “for example”). Reduce hesitation words like “uh” and avoid redundancy. Aim for 2–3 coherent sentences.

示例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, you can see many cyclists on the streets during rush hour, especially students and delivery riders.

× Yes I do. I think bike are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are popular in my country.

Subject-verb agreement and count noun form: 'bike' is a countable noun and when referring to bikes in general use the plural 'bikes'. The verb 'are' agrees with the plural noun 'bikes'. Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural punctuation. Suggestion: Use plural for general statements about countable items (e.g., 'cars are', 'books are').

× Uh, they are have a lot of bike in the city.

✓ Uh, there are a lot of bikes in the city.

Incorrect use of verbs and structure: 'they are have' is ungrammatical because two main verbs are combined incorrectly. The correct existential construction is 'there are' to state existence/quantity. Also use the plural 'bikes' for countable nouns and include the article 'a' with 'lot' as 'a lot of'. Suggestion: Use 'there is/there are' for stating quantities (e.g., 'There are many parks in the city').