自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but has several grammar and clarity issues. Make a direct topic sentence, correct verb tenses, and give one or two specific supporting details (age, what kind of bike, a brief memory). Use linking words (for example, “when”, “and”, “because”) to make the reply coherent. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

示例: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old because my father bought it for my birthday. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I remember learning to ride it in the park near our house. That bike made me feel very independent and happy.

建议: Your answer conveys the main idea but contains word choice and grammar errors. Use correct nouns (bike, not bag), subject-verb agreement, and clearer linking phrases to explain reasons. Provide one or two specific reasons or examples (cost, traffic, environment) to support your view. Keep sentences concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars and cities can be crowded. For example, students and delivery workers often use bikes since they are cheap and easy to park.

× Yes, when I was years old I have a back and that that back is my father sent me as a birthday gift.

✓ Yes, when I was a child my father sent me a bike as a birthday gift.

The original sentence has multiple structure and word-choice problems: missing age after 'was', incorrect noun 'back' instead of 'bike', incorrect tense 'have' instead of past 'had' or simply use past passive 'was given'/'my father sent me'. It also contains a duplicated word 'that'. To correct, supply the implied phrase 'a child' (or an age), replace 'back' with 'bike', remove duplicate 'that', and use past tense to match the time frame ('when I was ...'). Suggested improvement: plan the sentence as 'When I was [age]/a child, my father sent me a bike as a birthday gift.'

× Yeah, I think bags are very popular in our country because it's not everyone can buy cars.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in our country because not everyone can buy cars.

The main errors are a wrong noun 'bags' instead of 'bikes' and an awkward clause 'it's not everyone can buy cars'. Replace 'bags' with 'bikes'. Also remove the dummy 'it' and restructure to 'not everyone can buy cars' to make the sentence grammatical. Suggested improvement: use simple negative subject-verb order for clarity: '... because not everyone can buy cars.'

× So bikes is very popular.

✓ So bikes are very popular.

The subject 'bikes' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are', not 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Suggested improvement: identify the number (singular/plural) of the subject and choose the corresponding verb form: 'bikes' -> 'are'.