自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Используйте правильную грамматику (past simple с I: 'was' не используется; нужно 'I was' только в утвердительной форме, но здесь — 'I was a child' — неверно. Правильно: 'when I was a child' или более естественно: 'when I was little'). Дайте прямой топик предложения, затем при необходимости добавьте конкретную деталь или причину. Следите за длиной — до 3–4 коротких предложений; используйте связки для плавности.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbour’s bike, but I didn’t own one.

建议: Улучшите согласование подлежащего и сказуемого и стройность ответа. Начните с полноценного утверждения, затем добавьте конкретную поддержку с использованием связок (for example, because, so). Исправьте формы: 'probably many boys in my class do' и 'My teammate rides'. Дайте более точную информацию (кто, когда, почему) в 2–3 предложениях.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many boys and girls in my class cycle to school because it’s cheap and convenient. My teammate rides his bike after school to practice with the team.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I were a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The verb 'were' is incorrect because the subject is first person singular 'I' and the past tense of 'to be' for 'I' is 'was'. Use 'was' with singular subjects in simple past. Suggestion: remember the past forms: I was, he/she/it was, you/we/they were.

× Yes, probably all boys in my class.

✓ Yes, probably all the boys in my class are.

The original fragment lacks a verb and the definite article 'the' is needed before 'boys' when referring to a specific group. To answer the question about popularity, include the verb 'are' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: include a verb and use 'the' when speaking about a specific group: 'all the boys in my class are.'

× My teammate ride a bike after school.

✓ My teammate rides a bike after school.

The subject 'My teammate' is singular, so the verb should take the third person singular form 'rides'. In simple present for he/she/it, add -s or -es to the base verb. Suggestion: for singular third-person subjects, use 'rides' not 'ride'.