T恤衫— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say how often you wear T-shirts and why, using linking words to add details.

示例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are very comfortable and affordable. For instance, I usually buy them from local stores where prices are reasonable.

建议: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes. To improve, give a clear topic sentence, use linking words like 'because' or 'so', and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, provide specific reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are easily available and affordable. I enjoy trying different styles to keep my wardrobe fresh.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to clearly state your opinion first, then explain with reasons using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary and avoid redundancy.

示例: In my country, older people usually prefer traditional clothes because they find them more comfortable than T-shirts. For example, many elders wear traditional dresses daily for comfort.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid unnecessary phrases and ensure sentences are complete.

示例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child because I thought they looked nice. My mother usually bought them for me when we visited relatives.

× I wear that he should very often.

✓ I wear them very often.

The original sentence uses incorrect words and structure. 'Wear' should be followed by the object 'them' (referring to T-shirts), and 'he should' is incorrect here. The corrected sentence uses the correct object and removes unnecessary words.

× I can see on daily basis and Bradford where did the more comfort table and more and I can get them in affordable price.

✓ I wear them on a daily basis because they are more comfortable, and I can get them at an affordable price in Bradford.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'On daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis', 'more comfort table' should be 'more comfortable', and 'in affordable price' should be 'at an affordable price'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I can see yes, I prefer provide T-shirt every single time when I go for the group for the shopping.

✓ Yes, I prefer to buy T-shirts every single time when I go shopping with the group.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs. 'Provide T-shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'buy T-shirts'. Also, 'go for the group for the shopping' is awkward; 'go shopping with the group' is correct.

× Because they are easily available everywhere and they're very affordable price.

✓ Because they are easily available everywhere and very affordable.

The phrase 'they're very affordable price' is incorrect because 'affordable' is an adjective and should not be followed by 'price' here. The corrected sentence removes 'price' to make it grammatically correct.

× And. I love to try new new type of T-shirts every day.

✓ And I love to try new types of T-shirts every day.

The original sentence repeats 'new' unnecessarily and uses 'type' in singular when plural is appropriate. The correction removes the repetition and uses the plural 'types'.

× I said in my country older people now prefer prepared should they preferred to wear our traditional dress and they feel it more comfort table for them to wear their traditional dress because.

✓ I said in my country older people now prefer to wear traditional dress and they feel it is more comfortable for them to wear traditional dress because.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verb forms. 'Prefer prepared should they preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to wear'. Also, 'more comfort table' should be 'more comfortable'.

× Mike traditional dresses more comfort rible than that T-shirt.

✓ Traditional dresses are more comfortable than T-shirts.

The original sentence has spelling errors and incorrect word order. 'Mike' is likely a typo, 'comfort rible' should be 'comfortable', and 'that T-shirt' should be 'T-shirts' for general comparison.

× When I was a kid I always preferred to wear T-shirt I think.

✓ When I was a kid, I always preferred to wear T-shirts, I think.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing commas and plural form for 'T-shirts' to match general usage.

× Wearing T-shirt enhance my beauty.

✓ Wearing T-shirts enhanced my beauty.

The verb 'enhance' should be in past tense 'enhanced' to match the past time frame, and 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general reference.

× On that time and my mother.

✓ At that time, my mother

The phrase 'On that time and my mother.' is incomplete and uses incorrect preposition. 'At that time' is correct, and the sentence needs to be completed.

× Always buy bout some T-shirt from when we visited our uncle home.

✓ Always bought some T-shirts when we visited our uncle's home.

The verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought' to match 'visited'. 'Bout' is a typo for 'bought'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts'. Also, possessive form 'uncle's home' is correct.