T恤衫— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use plural form correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, say "I wear T-shirts every weekend because I usually wear short sleeve shirts to work on weekdays, so I prefer to relax in plain T-shirts, usually white ones."

示例: I wear T-shirts every weekend because I usually wear short sleeve shirts to work on weekdays, so I prefer to relax in plain T-shirts, usually white ones.

建议: Pay attention to plural forms and verb tenses. Also, add linking words to improve flow. For example, "I used to buy T-shirts a lot, but these days I just wear the ones I already have."

示例: I used to buy T-shirts a lot, but these days I just wear the ones I already have.

建议: Avoid filler words like "umm" and use plural forms correctly. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Many older people wear T-shirts because they are easy to wear and suitable for Thailand's weather."

示例: Many older people wear T-shirts because they are easy to wear and suitable for Thailand's weather.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, "Yes, my mom always dressed me in T-shirts because they are cheap and easy to clean, so we didn't have to worry about getting them dirty."

示例: Yes, my mom always dressed me in T-shirts because they are cheap and easy to clean, so we didn't have to worry about getting them dirty.

× I wear T-shirt every weekend since on my weekday I already wear a short sleeve shirt to work, so to be relaxed I just wear a plain T-shirt.

✓ I wear T-shirts every weekend since on my weekdays I already wear a short sleeve shirt to work, so to be relaxed I just wear a plain T-shirt.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to wearing them regularly on weekends, implying more than one occasion. Also, 'weekday' should be plural 'weekdays' to indicate multiple days. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I used to buy T-shirt a lot, but these day I just use those T-shirt that I bought.

✓ I used to buy T-shirts a lot, but these days I just use those T-shirts that I bought.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'these day' should be 'these days' to indicate the current time period. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Umm, I have seen many old people wear T-shirt because it's just easy and it's it's really suitable for weather in Thailand.

✓ Umm, I have seen many old people wear T-shirts because it's just easy and it's really suitable for the weather in Thailand.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to multiple people wearing them. Also, 'weather' needs the definite article 'the' before it. The plural issue is primary here.

× So many elder people wearing T-shirt.

✓ So many elderly people wear T-shirts.

The word 'elder' is incorrect here; 'elderly' is the correct adjective for older people. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to multiple people. The verb 'wearing' should be changed to 'wear' to match the plural subject. This involves singular/plural and verb form issues.

× Yes my mom always put T-shirt on me.

✓ Yes, my mom always put T-shirts on me.

The verb 'put' is correct in past tense but the noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it implies multiple occasions. Also, a comma after 'Yes' improves clarity. This is a singular and plural issue combined with punctuation.

× I think because it is cheap and keep make sure dirty very easily so we don't have to worry about our clothes.

✓ I think it's because they are cheap and get dirty very easily, so we don't have to worry about our clothes.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and verb usage. 'Keep make sure dirty' is incorrect; it should be 'get dirty'. Also, 'it is cheap' should be 'they are cheap' referring to T-shirts. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.