数字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and clear. Avoid phrases like 'I immediately cash them' which is unclear. Use simpler, more common expressions and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

示例: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I often use mnemonics to help me recall them. For example, when someone reads digits, I create associations that make it easier to remember for a longer time.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your thoughts. Also, avoid redundancy such as repeating 'definitely'.

示例: Yes, I will use numbers in my future work because I have studied mathematics extensively. I plan to combine my math skills with my passion for special education to help train children effectively.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences to avoid starting with 'Because of that'. Use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' to make your answer more coherent and natural. Also, keep it concise and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because it was my favorite subject. I liked solving numerical problems and complex theorems, so I pursued both my bachelor's and master's degrees in mathematics.

建议: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and clear. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to list items. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'for lifetime' and use 'for a long time' or 'always'.

示例: In daily life, numbers such as my identification number, license number, and mobile phone number are very important to me because I need to remember them to stay connected and complete official tasks.

× Being a mathematician, I have an elephant memory and very good at remembering numbers as well as alphabets.

✓ Being a mathematician, I have an elephant memory and am very good at remembering numbers as well as alphabets.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' before 'very good', which is necessary to complete the predicate. In English, when describing a state or quality, the verb 'to be' must be present. Here, 'am' is the correct form for the first person singular subject 'I'.

× Whenever someone read any digits, I immediately cash them and with some mnemonics I remember them for a longer time.

✓ Whenever someone reads any digits, I immediately catch them and with some mnemonics I remember them for a longer time.

The verb 'read' should be in the present tense 'reads' to agree with 'someone' (third person singular). Also, 'cash' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'catch' meaning to grasp or remember. The sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense is appropriate.

× In future definitely I will try to combine my mathematics skills and my other skills.

✓ In the future, definitely I will try to combine my mathematics skills and my other skills.

The phrase 'In future' should be 'In the future' to correctly use the definite article 'the' before 'future'. This is a common collocation in English when referring to time ahead.

× Special educator to train children's.

✓ I want to become a special educator to train children.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. Also, 'children's' is possessive and incorrect here; the plural 'children' is needed. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject and verb, completing the thought.

× Honestly speaking, mathematics was my favorite subject and I enjoy working with numbers and solving numerical problems and complex theorems.

✓ Honestly speaking, mathematics was my favorite subject and I enjoyed working with numbers and solving numerical problems and complex theorems.

Since the sentence refers to past experience ('was my favorite subject'), the verb 'enjoy' should be in past tense 'enjoyed' to maintain tense consistency.

× Because of that I pursued my bachelors and masters both in mathematics as major subject.

✓ Because of that, I pursued my bachelor's and master's both in mathematics as major subjects.

The degrees 'bachelor's' and 'master's' require possessive apostrophes. Also, 'major subject' should be plural 'major subjects' because it refers to both degrees. A comma after 'Because of that' improves readability.

× If we talk about daily life, I would say my identification number, license number and mobile phone number are the major ones which I should remember for lifetime so that I can connect.

✓ If we talk about daily life, I would say my identification number, license number, and mobile phone number are the major ones which I should remember for a lifetime so that I can connect.

A comma is needed after 'license number' in a list (Oxford comma). Also, 'for lifetime' should be 'for a lifetime' to correctly use the indefinite article before 'lifetime'.