数字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и избыточные слова. Постарайтесь использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать повторений, чтобы звучать более естественно и уверенно.

示例: Yes, I am quite good at remembering numbers, especially phone numbers of my relatives.

建议: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте повторений, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным.

示例: Yes, I believe numbers are very important in my future career because I want to be an economist, and my work will depend heavily on numerical data.

建议: Ваш ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении. Старайтесь использовать правильные слова и структуру предложений, а также связывать идеи для лучшей связности.

示例: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I liked solving puzzles and logical problems, which made the lessons more interesting.

建议: Ваш ответ понятен, но можно улучшить структуру и добавить связующие слова для плавности речи.

示例: My favorite number is 7 because it is the day I was born, and it is considered my lucky number.

× Yes, I think I'm a I'm a quite good to remembering numbers, especially in an, uh, remembering datas or phone numbers my relatives.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite good at remembering numbers, especially remembering data or phone numbers of my relatives.

The phrase 'good to remembering' is incorrect; the correct form is 'good at remembering' because 'good at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'datas' is incorrect as 'data' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. Additionally, 'phone numbers my relatives' lacks a preposition; it should be 'phone numbers of my relatives.'

× Yes, I think I'm a I'm a quite good to remembering numbers, especially in an, uh, remembering datas or phone numbers my relatives.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite good at remembering numbers, especially remembering data or phone numbers of my relatives.

The word 'datas' is incorrect because 'data' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Use 'data' without 's' to refer to information collectively.

× Yes, I think I'm a I'm a quite good to remembering numbers, especially in an, uh, remembering datas or phone numbers my relatives.

✓ Yes, I think I'm quite good at remembering numbers, especially remembering data or phone numbers of my relatives.

The phrase 'phone numbers my relatives' is missing the preposition 'of' to show possession. The correct phrase is 'phone numbers of my relatives.'

× Yes, I believe it's, it's significant thing in my world because umm, you know, I am an economist in the future and so all the works in my work is depends on numbers.

✓ Yes, I believe it's a significant thing in my world because, umm, you know, I will be an economist in the future and so all the work in my job depends on numbers.

The phrase 'I am an economist in the future' is incorrect because it refers to a future state; the correct modal verb usage is 'I will be an economist.' Also, 'all the works in my work is depends' has subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect word choice; 'work' is uncountable here, and 'depends' should agree with singular 'work.'

× Yes, I believe it's, it's significant thing in my world because umm, you know, I am an economist in the future and so all the works in my work is depends on numbers.

✓ Yes, I believe it's a significant thing in my world because, umm, you know, I will be an economist in the future and so all the work in my job depends on numbers.

The word 'works' is incorrect here because 'work' as a noun meaning job or tasks is uncountable and should not be pluralized. Use 'work' instead of 'works.'

× If I'm not mistaken, in my childhood umm I enjoy studying maths and I found solving problems quartets fine for example.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, in my childhood, umm, I enjoyed studying maths and I found solving problem sets fine, for example.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past context 'in my childhood.' The correct tense is past: 'enjoyed.' Also, 'quartets' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'problem sets.'

× If I'm not mistaken, in my childhood umm I enjoy studying maths and I found solving problems quartets fine for example.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, in my childhood, umm, I enjoyed studying maths and I found solving problem sets fine, for example.

The word 'quartets' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'problem sets' or 'problems.' 'Quartets' refers to groups of four, which does not fit the context.

× I like it puzzles and logical challenges which made lessons more interesting.

✓ I like puzzles and logical challenges, which made lessons more interesting.

The phrase 'I like it puzzles' is incorrect; 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses properly.

× My favorite number is 7 because it's a day when I was born on and it's my lucky number.

✓ My favorite number is 7 because it's the day I was born, and it's my lucky number.

The phrase 'a day when I was born on' is incorrect because 'on' is redundant when 'when' is used. Also, 'a day' should be 'the day' to specify the particular day of birth.