新闻— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý muốn nói. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý.

示例: Yes, I am interested in news because I like to stay informed about current events. I usually read news articles every day, which helps me understand what's happening around the world.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lộn xộn và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

示例: I usually find news on social media platforms like Facebook, Instagram, and TikTok because they are user-friendly and easy to access. I also use news apps to get the latest updates quickly.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu cấu trúc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy tránh sử dụng những từ không phù hợp hoặc không rõ nghĩa.

示例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I prefer to work in a different field. I enjoy updating information for my own work rather than reporting news.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lộn xộn và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

示例: Yes, I have read the news this morning. Since I am interested in stock investment, I always update myself with the latest information about the world economy, government policies, and politics.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc và logic.

示例: No, I don't often talk with my friends about the news. After a hard day at work, we usually discuss our daily lives, challenges at work or study, and sometimes about stocks.

× Oh yes, I'm interested in news because my measure is fine and an banking show.

✓ Oh yes, I'm interested in news because my mood is fine and a banking show.

The word 'measure' is incorrectly used; the correct word is 'mood' to express feelings. Also, 'an banking show' should be 'a banking show' because 'banking' starts with a consonant sound. Use 'a' before consonant sounds and 'an' before vowel sounds.

× I always I always object news everyday an quickly, so I'm very ecstatic when I read something news.

✓ I always read news every day quickly, so I'm very ecstatic when I read some news.

The phrase 'object news' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'read' for news. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day' when meaning each day. 'An quickly' is incorrect; 'quickly' is an adverb and does not need 'an'. 'Something news' should be 'some news' as 'news' is uncountable.

× Oh, I usually find news in social media platforms are in the chase knew news app, Facebook, Instagram or TikTok is a is a is a friendly and easy to find something knows it has me upset adapted easily.

✓ Oh, I usually find news on social media platforms or in the Chase News app. Facebook, Instagram, or TikTok are friendly and easy to use to find news; they help me stay updated easily.

Use 'on' with 'social media platforms' instead of 'in'. The phrase 'are in the chase knew news app' is unclear; corrected to 'or in the Chase News app'. 'Is a is a is a' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Something knows' should be 'news'. 'It has me upset adapted easily' is unclear; corrected to 'they help me stay updated easily'.

× I think you're nice now. I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I want you working up ang ang.

✓ I think it's nice now. I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I want to work in another field.

'You're' (you are) is incorrectly used instead of 'it's' (it is). 'I want you working up ang ang' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'I want to work in another field' to express preference.

× I did a update info appraise something news for a my work. I chose a.

✓ I update information and appraise some news for my work. I chose this.

'Did a update' is incorrect; use 'update' as a verb. 'Info' should be 'information' for formality. 'Appraise something news' is incorrect; use 'appraise some news'. 'For a my work' should be 'for my work'. 'I chose a' is incomplete; corrected to 'I chose this'.

× To be honest, I'm family investing in stock, so every morning I own all always rich than news updating the information in the world economy and government, political or so on.

✓ To be honest, my family is investing in stocks, so every morning I always read news updating information about the world economy, government, politics, and so on.

'I'm family investing' is incorrect; corrected to 'my family is investing'. 'Stock' should be plural 'stocks'. 'I own all always rich than news updating' is incorrect; corrected to 'I always read news updating'. 'Government, political or so on' corrected to 'government, politics, and so on'.

× So I always updating quickly.

✓ So I always update quickly.

'Always updating' is incorrect here; 'always' should be followed by the base verb 'update' to indicate habitual action.

× Oh no, who I don't often spoke with my rings about the news I trust a contact with my rings I begins after worked a hard day are we usually talk about our days that we know about challenges in work or study an stock about.

✓ Oh no, I don't often speak with my friends about the news. I keep in contact with my friends. After working a hard day, we usually talk about our day, challenges at work or study, and stocks.

'Who I don't often spoke' is incorrect; use 'I don't often speak'. 'My rings' should be 'my friends'. 'I trust a contact' corrected to 'I keep in contact'. 'I begins after worked' corrected to 'After working'. 'Are we usually talk' corrected to 'we usually talk'. 'Our days that we know about challenges in work or study an stock about' corrected to 'our day, challenges at work or study, and stocks'.