新闻— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。例如，“It let me know what's happening to the earth. To the world.”可以合并为一句更自然的表达。

示例: Yes, I'm interested in news. I read it every day on my phone and watch it on TV because it helps me understand what's happening around the world.

建议: 回答中应注意语法和连贯性，避免断句错误。使用连接词使句子更流畅，如“Firstly... Secondly...”。

示例: Firstly, I check news on WeChat or Weibo using my phone, and secondly, I watch the news on TV while having dinner.

建议: 回答较直接，但可用更自然的表达方式，避免简单句堆砌。可以用连接词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

示例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I'm not interested in that job, and I'm not very comfortable talking to strangers.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应注意时态和句子结构，避免断句。

示例: Yes, I read the news this morning. I opened my phone and checked the news on WeChat.

建议: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多。应简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和断句错误。

示例: Yes, I often talk with my roommates about the news. We usually share our feelings and opinions about what we see.

× Yes, I'm interested in news.

✓ Yes, I'm interested in the news.

“news”作为不可数名词，前面需要加定冠词“the”表示特指新闻。

× I read news everyday on phone and on TV.

✓ I read the news every day on my phone and on TV.

“news”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指新闻；“everyday”应改为副词短语“every day”；“phone”前应加物主代词“my”表示所属。

× It let me know what's happening to the earth.

✓ It lets me know what's happening on the earth.

动词“let”应使用第三人称单数形式“lets”；介词“to”用错，应改为“on”表示发生在地球上。

× To the world.

✓ In the world.

介词“to”用错，应改为“in”表示“在世界上”。

× Firstly I use my phone to check news on we chat or Weibo and the secondly I watch news on TV when I. Have dinner.

✓ Firstly, I use my phone to check the news on WeChat or Weibo, and secondly, I watch the news on TV when I have dinner.

“news”前应加定冠词“the”；“WeChat”拼写错误；“the secondly”应改为“secondly”；句子中断号应去除，保持连贯。

× It let me know what's happening to the earth.

✓ It lets me know what's happening on the earth.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“lets”。

× Yes, I had the read. The news this morning.

✓ Yes, I have read the news this morning.

“had the read”结构错误，应使用现在完成时“have read”表示刚刚完成的动作。

× I open my phone and re news we chat.

✓ I open my phone and read the news on WeChat.

“re”应为“read”；“news”前应加定冠词“the”；“we chat”应写为“WeChat”，且前面应加介词“on”。

× Yes, I always communicate with my roommates with the with news in or Dhamma tree and we often.

✓ Yes, I always communicate with my roommates about the news in our dormitory, and we often...

“communicate with”后应接“about”表示“关于”；“with the with news”重复且错误；“in or Dhamma tree”应为“in our dormitory”；句子未完成，需补充完整。

× Talk about what we feel when we see the news.

✓ We often talk about what we feel when we see the news.

句子缺少主语，应补充主语“we”使句子完整。