新闻— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, then providing a clear reason with linking words. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

示例: I wasn't interested in the news when I was younger because it often made me feel scared. However, I now realise that staying informed is important, so I have started watching the news more regularly.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'I just see' and be more specific about how you access news.

示例: I usually watch the news on TV about four times a week, especially when I am at home with my family. This helps me stay updated on current events.

建议: Your answer is somewhat disorganised and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion first, then explain your reasons using linking words. Also, use appropriate vocabulary related to journalism and avoid filler words.

示例: I wouldn't like to be a journalist because it is a challenging job that requires travelling frequently. Moreover, journalists need strong writing and investigative skills, which I don't feel confident about.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to answer directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your preferences. Avoid unnecessary fillers and be specific about what you watch or read.

示例: Yes, I watched the morning news today, especially the local news from the northeast. However, I usually avoid reading newspapers or online articles because I find them annoying.

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to expand your answer with specific examples.

示例: To be honest, I don't often discuss the news with my friends because it can be controversial. Instead, we prefer talking about celebrities, games, contests, and sports, which are more enjoyable topics.

× To be honest, when I was young, I I wasn't interested in news because I don't like truly reality because it makes me feel afraid so.

✓ To be honest, when I was young, I wasn't interested in news because I didn't truly like reality as it made me feel afraid.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the speaker refers to a past time ('when I was young'), the verbs should be in the past tense ('didn't like', 'made'). This maintains tense consistency and clarity.

× But I know this is that is very important point to live my life.

✓ But I know this is a very important point in living my life.

The original sentence is awkward and contains redundancy ('this is that is'). The correction simplifies the sentence and uses the correct preposition 'in' with 'living' to express purpose.

× So recently I I watch news to improve my.

✓ So recently I have been watching the news to improve myself.

The sentence is incomplete and uses the simple present tense 'watch' incorrectly for a recent ongoing action. The present perfect continuous 'have been watching' is appropriate here. Also, 'improve my' is incomplete; 'improve myself' is correct.

× I usually find news four times a week because I just see when I get out of my room.

✓ I usually find news four times a week because I just watch it when I get out of my room.

The verb 'see' is not appropriate for watching news; 'watch' is better. Also, 'find news' is awkward; 'get news' or 'watch news' is more natural. The preposition 'out of' is correct here.

× I I've seen my TV at home with my family, so yeah.

✓ I watch TV at home with my family, so yeah.

The phrase 'I've seen my TV' is incorrect; one does not 'see' a TV but 'watch' it. Also, the present simple tense 'watch' is appropriate for habitual actions.

× No, because it's very a difficult job and I don't want to take around everywhere, so I don't like it.

✓ No, because it's a very difficult job and I don't want to travel around everywhere, so I don't like it.

The article 'a' should come before 'very difficult' not after 'very'. Also, 'take around' is incorrect; 'travel around' is the correct phrase.

× And journalists have, uh, some talent and writing and leading and some investigating knowledge, so.

✓ And journalists have some talent in writing, leading, and investigative knowledge, so.

The sentence lacks proper prepositions and correct adjective forms. 'Investigating knowledge' should be 'investigative knowledge'. Also, listing talents requires proper conjunctions and prepositions.

× Yes, I have seen umm Morning News, so I always uh, so uh, northeast news in the morning, but I don't read them because I don't like some newspapers and online article because it's very annoying.

✓ Yes, I have seen the Morning News, and I always watch the northeast news in the morning, but I don't read them because I don't like some newspapers and online articles as they are very annoying.

'Have seen' is acceptable for recent past, but 'watch' is better for habitual action. 'Article' should be plural 'articles' to match 'some newspapers'. Also, 'because it's very annoying' should be 'as they are very annoying' to refer to plural 'newspapers and articles'.

× To be honest, I don't talk the news with my friends because it's it has some controversial content, so we just talk to some celebrity and enjoyable things such as games and contests, sports.

✓ To be honest, I don't talk about the news with my friends because it has some controversial content, so we just talk about celebrities and enjoyable things such as games, contests, and sports.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. 'Talk to' is used for addressing someone directly. Also, 'celebrity' should be plural 'celebrities' to match the context. The list of enjoyable things needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.