新闻— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接和自然，先用一句主题句表明态度，再用1–2句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法（冠词、介词、单复数）和用词准确，避免冗长或不连贯的表达。可用连接词如 because, so, for example 来组织句子。

示例: No, I'm not really interested in the news. I find that a lot of the headlines in Hong Kong recently are negative, which makes me feel sad, so I tend to avoid watching them.

建议: 回答已包含渠道和例子，但细节和表达需清晰化。注意时态和词语搭配（e.g., "on Instagram", "recently"），并用连接词使句子更流畅。可补充具体偏好类型或频率。

示例: I usually get news from social media, such as Instagram and Facebook, where I follow accounts that share headlines. Recently I saw a controversial post on Instagram. I also sometimes buy a newspaper to read more in-depth financial news.

建议: 结构清晰但有语法错误和重复，可更简洁有力。把理由分成两点，每点用一句支持，并用合适的连接词。注意固定搭配（"good at writing", "prefer a safer job"）。

示例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist. First, I'm not confident in my writing skills, and journalism requires clear, strong writing. Second, journalists can face dangerous situations, such as covering violent protests, so I would prefer a safer career.

建议: 回答混乱且有许多语法和词汇错误，内容不具体。应先直接回答，然后说明何时、为什么以及具体新闻内容。避免模糊词和不相关短语。练习用简单句子表述事实并补充一两条具体细节。

示例: Yes, I read some news this morning while I was travelling because I was bored. I read a technology article about a new rectangular-shaped device that has a soft, fuzzy cover.

建议: 需要更自然的表达和完整的例子。先给出简短肯定句，再说明原因并举具体例子。注意时态一致和主谓一致，避免句尾不完整。可以说谈话带来不同观点、信息或建议。

示例: Yes, I often discuss the news with my friends because it helps me broaden my perspective and test my opinions. For example, last week I shared my views on an environmental issue, and my friends responded with different suggestions and facts.

× No, I am not big fan of news because in Hong Kong there are lots of bad news recently for example, unlike Dipole which make me always feel sad and uncomfortable.

✓ No, I am not a big fan of the news because in Hong Kong there has been a lot of bad news recently; for example, [unfamiliar term] which always makes me feel sad and uncomfortable.

句中缺少不定冠词“a”和定冠词“the”。“big fan”前需加不定冠词“a”；在泛指特定類別（新聞）時常用“the news”。另外时态和主谓也需调整：recently 与现在完成时连用更自然（has been a lot of bad news），并且从句中主语和动词要一致（which always makes）。建议：在可数名词单数前加冠词，谈论整体概念时用“the news”，并注意主谓一致与时态搭配。

× for example, unlike Dipole which make me always feel sad and uncomfortable.

✓ for example, [unfamiliar term] which always makes me feel sad and uncomfortable.

原句从句主语（which 指代前面的单一事件或事物）是单数，因此谓语动词应为第三人称单数“makes”而不是“make”。建议：识别先行词是单数还是复数，并使用正确的动词形式以保持主谓一致。

× So I would like to try to avoid to watch those news.

✓ So I would like to try to avoid watching that news.

动词“avoid”后应接动名词（verb + -ing），不能接不定式“to watch”。另外“news”作不可数名词，通常说“that news”或“the news”。建议：记住“avoid”后用动名词，news 作不可数时用合适的限定词。

× I usually use some social media like Instagram or Facebook to find some news.

✓ I usually use social media like Instagram or Facebook to find news.

“some social media”或“some news”在此处显得冗余或不自然。“social media”通常作为不可数名词使用，不需要不定量词“some”；同样“news”作为不可数名词不需“some”。建议：去掉不必要的“some”，使用更自然的表达。

× For example, in recent I watched the taboo news in my Instagram.

✓ For example, recently I saw taboo news on my Instagram.

“in recent”不正确，应该用副词“recently”。社交媒体上看到新闻用“saw ... on my Instagram”或者“see ... on Instagram”；动词时态若指最近发生可用现在完成或过去式，若强调刚刚发生用过去式或现在完成时。建议：用“recently”并用正确介词“on Instagram”。

× Also, sometimes I'll buy some newspaper to know more about the financial news.

✓ Also, sometimes I'll buy a newspaper to learn more about financial news.

“buy some newspaper”不自然，英语中通常用单数“a newspaper”或复数“newspapers”。“to know more about”语义可改为“to learn more about”。“financial news”不用定冠词或可用“the”视语境。建议：使用自然的搭配“buy a newspaper”并用“learn”替换“know”以表达获取信息。

× No, I do not want to be a journalist because I am not very good at writing and journalists require a strong writing skill to report a story clearly.

✓ No, I do not want to be a journalist because I am not very good at writing, and journalism requires strong writing skills to report a story clearly.

原句中“journalists require a strong writing skill”在词性和数上不自然。“journalism”（新闻行业）更合适的主语，或将“journalists”仍用但改为复数“skills”。“writing skill”通常复数形式“writing skills”。建议：用“journalism requires strong writing skills”或“journalists need strong writing skills”。

× Also, I am think journalists often face dangerous situations, for example while reporting or covering violent protests, so I would prefer a safer job.

✓ Also, I think journalists often face dangerous situations, for example while reporting on or covering violent protests, so I would prefer a safer job.

原句“It is think”结构错误，正确应为“I think”。此外搭配“reporting on”更常见。建议：注意主语与动词的正确组合，使用常见搭配“reporting on”。

× Yes, I have read some news in this morning because I felt very bored in like during the travelling time.

✓ Yes, I read/Yes, I have read some news this morning because I felt very bored during the travelling time.

“in this morning”不正确，正确为“this morning”。与现在完成时连用时通常不用具体过去时间表达（如果强调具体已发生用一般过去式“read”）。“in like during the travelling time”有冗余和混乱，应简化为“during the travelling time”。建议：根据想表达的时间选择时态：若强调今天早上已发生用过去式，若强调最近经历可用现在完成但去掉具体时间词。

× Also I tried to find some new reach interesting.

✓ Also I tried to find some new and interesting things to read.

原句结构混乱，词序和词形错误。“new reach interesting”无意义。可能想说“new and interesting things to read”。建议：重组短语，使用名词“things”或“articles”并用形容词并列“new and interesting”。

× For example like the news about the technology.

✓ For example, like the news about technology.

“the technology”在此不需要定冠词，若泛指某领域用“technology”即可。并且“for example like”重复，二者可择一。建议：去掉多余词并使用正确的冠词或无冠词搭配。

× It is talk about the rectangle furry.

✓ It was about a rectangular furry creature./It talked about a rectangular furry object.

原句中的“It is talk about”语法错误，应使用被动或过去式“it was about”或“it talked about”。另外“rectangle furry”词序和词类错误，应该是“rectangular furry (creature/object)”等。建议：使用正确的时态和形容词形式（rectangular），并补全名词以便表达清楚。

× Yes, definitely because I think I talked with my friends about the news can help me to broaden my horizon or stress my opinion.

✓ Yes, definitely because I think talking with my friends about the news can help me broaden my horizons or express my opinion.

原句中“I talked with my friends about the news can help”语法混乱，需用动名词“talking”。“broaden my horizon”习惯复数“horizons”。“stress my opinion”不自然，改为“express my opinion”。建议：使用动名词引导主语，注意惯用短语和词汇搭配。

× For example, in last week I shared about my advice about this environmental issue or news, my friends always shared her opinion to me and.

✓ For example, last week I shared my thoughts about an environmental issue or news; my friends always shared their opinions with me.

“in last week”应为“last week”。“shared about my advice about”不自然，改为“shared my thoughts about”。“my friends always shared her opinion”代词性别不一致，friends 应配复数代词“their”；“shared ... to me”应为“shared ... with me”。句末不完整。建议：使用正确时间短语，调整动词搭配，代词与名词数一致，并完整表达句子。