分享— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和逻辑关系。可以用更自然的表达方式来说明父母鼓励分享的原因。

示例: Yes, my parents encouraged me to share with others because sharing helps build good relationships. When I was a child, they often praised me for sharing toys with my sister.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免模糊表达，如“go to new vegetables”不合适。可以具体说明分享的食物类型和原因。

示例: I usually share food and drinks with my friends because we enjoy trying new dishes. For example, we often share Japanese and Korean food to experience different flavors together.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，注意单复数和句子连贯性。可以具体说明为什么牙刷是私人物品，避免模糊表达。

示例: Definitely, I prefer not to share my toothbrush because it is a personal item that we use every morning and night. Sharing it can be unhygienic and unhealthy.

建议: 回答中存在拼写错误（cards应为 cars）和表达不够流畅的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然和连贯。可以具体说明共享汽车的优点。

示例: Definitely, I think more people will share cars in the future because it reduces costs and helps protect the environment. Sharing cars can contribute to a more sustainable society.

× Yes, my parents encouraged me to share anything to people because it can build a bad group relationship with others when I was a child, my parents always encouraged and appreciated me to share the toys with my sister and my.

✓ Yes, my parents encouraged me to share anything with people because it can build good group relationships with others. When I was a child, my parents always encouraged and appreciated me sharing toys with my sister and me.

句中“share anything to people”应改为“share anything with people”，介词用法错误（属于介词使用错误）。“build a bad group relationship”应为“build good group relationships”，复数形式和形容词使用不当。最后“share the toys with my sister and my”应为“share toys with my sister and me”，代词宾格错误。

× Yes, my parents encouraged me to share anything to people because it can build a bad group relationship with others when I was a child, my parents always encouraged and appreciated me to share the toys with my sister and my.

✓ Yes, my parents encouraged me to share anything with people because it can build good group relationships with others. When I was a child, my parents always encouraged and appreciated me sharing toys with my sister and me.

“share anything to people”中的“to”应改为“with”，因为“share”后面通常接“with”表示与某人分享。

× Yes, my parents encouraged me to share anything to people because it can build a bad group relationship with others when I was a child, my parents always encouraged and appreciated me to share the toys with my sister and my.

✓ Yes, my parents encouraged me to share anything with people because it can build good group relationships with others. When I was a child, my parents always encouraged and appreciated me sharing toys with my sister and me.

“my sister and my”中的“my”应改为“me”，因为这里是宾语，需要用宾格代词。

× I always share food and drinks with my friends because we like to try new recipes and we will go to new vegetables to try interesting food such as the Japanese and Korean food. So I like to share with friends.

✓ I always share food and drinks with my friends because we like to try new recipes and we will try new vegetables to try interesting foods such as Japanese and Korean food. So I like to share with friends.

“go to new vegetables”表达不正确，应改为“try new vegetables”。“interesting food”应为复数“interesting foods”，因为指多种食物。

× I always share food and drinks with my friends because we like to try new recipes and we will go to new vegetables to try interesting food such as the Japanese and Korean food. So I like to share with friends.

✓ I always share food and drinks with my friends because we like to try new recipes and we will try new vegetables to try interesting foods such as Japanese and Korean food. So I like to share with friends.

“go to new vegetables”中的“go to”用法错误，应改为“try”，表示尝试新蔬菜。

× Definitely toothbrush. I prefer not to share with others because toothbrush is our personal belongings and we will use it everyday morning and night and there have many.

✓ Definitely toothbrushes. I prefer not to share mine with others because a toothbrush is our personal belonging and we use it every morning and night, and there are many germs.

“Definitely toothbrush”应为复数“Definitely toothbrushes”。“toothbrush is our personal belongings”中“toothbrush”单数，“belongings”复数不匹配，应改为“a toothbrush is our personal belonging”。“everyday morning and night”应为“every morning and night”。“there have many”不完整，应补充为“there are many germs”。

× Definitely toothbrush. I prefer not to share with others because toothbrush is our personal belongings and we will use it everyday morning and night and there have many.

✓ Definitely toothbrushes. I prefer not to share mine with others because a toothbrush is our personal belonging and we use it every morning and night, and there are many germs.

“share with others”后应加宾语“mine”，表示“我的牙刷”。

× Definitely toothbrush. I prefer not to share with others because toothbrush is our personal belongings and we will use it everyday morning and night and there have many.

✓ Definitely toothbrushes. I prefer not to share mine with others because a toothbrush is our personal belonging and we use it every morning and night, and there are many germs.

“use it everyday morning and night”中“everyday”应为副词短语“every morning and night”，表示每天早晚。

× Definitely yes, people will share cards in future because they can use a lower cost and price to buy their own car. Moreover, share cars can protect the environment. It can become a sustainable country in the future too.

✓ Definitely yes, people will share cars in the future because they can use a lower cost to buy their own car. Moreover, shared cars can protect the environment. It can help the country become sustainable in the future too.

“share cards”应为“share cars”，拼写错误。“a lower cost and price”重复，应简化为“a lower cost”。“share cars”应改为“shared cars”，形容词形式。

× Definitely yes, people will share cards in future because they can use a lower cost and price to buy their own car. Moreover, share cars can protect the environment. It can become a sustainable country in the future too.

✓ Definitely yes, people will share cars in the future because they can use a lower cost to buy their own car. Moreover, shared cars can protect the environment. It can help the country become sustainable in the future too.

“in future”应为“in the future”，需要加定冠词。