分享— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı açısından daha dikkatli olmalısınız. Cümleniz karışık ve anlaşılması zor. Daha açık ve doğal ifadeler kullanarak, soruya doğrudan yanıt verin ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutmaya çalışın.

示例: My parents didn't encourage me to share because they believed that if you give something to someone, they might always expect more. I often asked them why people want more after receiving a little.

建议: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha tutarlı hale getirebilirsiniz. Detayları daha spesifik vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirin.

示例: Usually, my friends and I share game coins. Also, sometimes we buy games for each other, which makes sharing more enjoyable.

建议: Cümlenizde uygunsuz kelime kullanımı var, bunu değiştirmelisiniz. Ayrıca, cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için cümle yapınızı geliştirin ve nedenlerinizi daha açık ifade edin.

示例: I prefer not to share my books because I enjoy reading them myself. Sometimes, I even think about selling them instead of sharing.

建议: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. Daha açık ve düzgün cümleler kurarak fikrinizi net ifade edin. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın ve detayları daha spesifik verin.

示例: I think rich people can share cars, but poor people cannot because car prices are very high in Turkey. For example, there is a 25% tax which makes it expensive for many.

× My parents didn't encourage me about Cher because they usually said to me if you give someone one thing tomorrow they they want they ask will more always they taught me this and I asked them why they wanted more when I give them a little bit.

✓ My parents didn't encourage me to share because they usually told me that if you give someone one thing, tomorrow they will want more. They always taught me this, and I asked them why they wanted more when I gave them a little bit.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and structure. 'Encourage me about Cher' should be 'encourage me to share'. 'They usually said to me' is better as 'they usually told me'. The phrase 'if you give someone one thing tomorrow they they want they ask will more always' is ungrammatical; it should be 'if you give someone one thing, tomorrow they will want more'. Also, 'when I give them' should be past tense 'when I gave them' to match the past context. The sentence is corrected for verb forms and clarity.

× Actually we share game coins, yes, if I don't remember wrong.

✓ Actually, we share game coins, yes, if I don't remember wrongly.

The phrase 'if I don't remember wrong' is incorrect; the adverb form 'wrongly' should be used to modify the verb 'remember'. This is an issue with incorrect use of adverbs (related to grammar problem type 13), but since the list does not include adverb errors explicitly, it is closest to singular/plural or adjective/adverb misuse. The correction uses 'wrongly' to properly modify the verb.

× But sometimes we share games like I'm buying him game and he's buying me too like that.

✓ But sometimes we share games, like I buy him a game and he buys me one too, like that.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and missing articles. 'I'm buying him game' should be 'I buy him a game' and 'he's buying me too' should be 'he buys me one too'. The correction fixes singular/plural and verb tense issues for clarity.

× I do not want to share my books because I read them and I don't want to give anyone even though I'm sometimes thinking why the **** I'm not selling it.

✓ I do not want to share my books because I read them and I don't want to give them to anyone, even though I sometimes think about why I'm not selling them.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and missing prepositions. 'I'm sometimes thinking' should be 'I sometimes think' to use simple present tense for habitual action. Also, 'give anyone' should be 'give them to anyone' to include the correct preposition and object. 'Selling it' should be 'selling them' to agree with plural 'books'.

× Rich people can, poor people cannot do it because A1 car price is too high in Turkish economy.

✓ Rich people can, but poor people cannot do it because the price of an A1 car is too high in the Turkish economy.

The sentence is missing the conjunction 'but' to connect contrasting ideas, which is a modal verb usage and conjunction issue. Also, 'A1 car price' should be 'the price of an A1 car' to use the definite article correctly. 'Turkish economy' should be 'the Turkish economy' to specify the noun.

× Like you have to pay 2000 twenty 25% tax.

✓ For example, you have to pay 2000 to 2500 in tax, which is 25%.

The original sentence '2000 twenty 25% tax' is unclear and incorrect quantifier usage. It likely means paying 2000 to 2500 units as 25% tax. The correction clarifies the quantifier and tax percentage.

× It is too much for me.

✓ It is too much for me.

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.