分享— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because they believe sharing is an important part of Chinese culture and it brings happiness to everyone involved.

建议: 回答较好，但句子较长且结尾不完整，建议分句表达并注意句子完整性。

示例: I enjoy sharing food with my friends because it helps us bond and create unforgettable memories. For example, last year in New Zealand, I ordered a large fried fish that was too big for one person, so I shared it with my friend and we both enjoyed it.

建议: 回答中有语气词和不完整句子，建议避免口语填充词，表达更完整清晰。

示例: In my opinion, very personal or deeply sad feelings are not suitable to share with friends because they might feel uneasy or overwhelmed. Therefore, I prefer to keep such emotions to myself and take some time to process them.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，存在语法错误和拼写错误，建议表达时注意语法和用词准确。

示例: Recently, I shared a designer brand bed with my best friend. It perfectly blends vintage and oriental styles. Since we both really like it, we decided to share it instead of buying another one.

建议: 回答中语法和句子结构有待改进，建议简化句子并注意主谓一致。

示例: The first person I would like to share good news with is definitely my mom. Whenever I achieve something, I share it with her, and she always gives me positive feedback and encouragement, which makes me feel confident.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确时态和更准确的词汇。

示例: I usually share gossip news with my friends. For example, I like to talk about celebrity affairs, such as when Taylor Swift got engaged. She's one of my favorite singers, so I was really surprised.

× Absolutely, My parents thought I need to share when I was a child because they think sharing is a a good Chinese traditional culture and you can enjoy the pleasant when you are sharing.

✓ Absolutely, my parents thought I needed to share when I was a child because they thought sharing is a good Chinese traditional culture and you can enjoy the pleasure when you are sharing.

这里时态不一致。主句是过去时（thought），从句中应使用过去时态（needed）来保持时态一致。并且“pleasant”应为名词形式“pleasure”。

× I ordered a big fried fish that are too big for one person so I shared with my friend and we enjoyed the.

✓ I ordered a big fried fish that was too big for one person so I shared it with my friend and we enjoyed it.

fish是单数，关系代词后动词应用单数was；缺少宾语，需加it。

× So when I experience such emotions, I will choose to uh, keep them myself and take some time to.

✓ So when I experience such emotions, I will choose to keep them to myself and take some time to.

短语应为“keep something to oneself”，表示保留给自己。

× Recently I shared a bed with my best friend. It's a designer brand product that perfectly blend vintage and oriental style. Both of lock us really like this, so we decided to share it instead of by another one.

✓ Recently I shared a bed with my best friend. It's a designer brand product that perfectly blends vintage and oriental style. Both of us really like this, so we decided to share it instead of buying another one.

动词应与主语一致，第三人称单数用blends；“Both of us”是正确表达；“by”应为“buy”。

× She whenever I have some achievement I will share with her and she always give me positive feedback and encouragement which help which let me feels confident.

✓ Whenever I have some achievement, I will share it with her and she always gives me positive feedback and encouragement which helps me feel confident.

主语she，动词应用第三人称单数形式gives和helps；“let me feels”应为“let me feel”。

× For example, I would like to talk about celebrities affairs such as Taylor Swift is were was engaged.

✓ For example, I would like to talk about celebrities' affairs such as Taylor Swift was engaged.

时态应为过去时was engaged，去掉多余的is和were。