分享— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
考生
My parent is the kindest person so they always teach me right thing in my life when I was a kid they always teach me share umm candy, cake or have my friends.
考官
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
考生
The thing I like to share is food. I like cooking so sometime I cook very much and I want to share my meal for other people. Sometime my friend need me and borrows something else I want. I will help you.
考官
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
考生
In my opinion, something like cosmetic or money is something which I cannot stay with other people because other people have different genetic and personality and it's so sensitive.
考官
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
考生
I am sharing some furniture with other people because I live with some friends in my house and I have so many furniture or uh, gorgeous uh, Indian charm so umm my friend can use.
考官
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
考生
The first person I would like to share with news is my older brother. He is a excellent person and I think they he always give me some useful advice when I have any news so I can investigate his idea.
考官
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
考生
I like to share some funny news with my friends, for example her experience about a cheap or some favourites that children. I want to try it with my close friends and I always share some some.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
分数: 55.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.
示例: Yes, my parents were very kind and always taught me to share things like candy and cake with my friends when I was a child.
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý hợp lý. Dùng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn.
示例: I like to share food because I enjoy cooking. Sometimes I cook extra meals and like to share them with others. Also, if my friends need something, I am happy to help them.
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
分数: 50.0建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Bạn nên giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
示例: I think some things like cosmetics or money are not suitable for sharing because they are personal and sensitive items that depend on individual preferences.
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
分数: 55.0建议: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Hãy sắp xếp ý theo trình tự hợp lý và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
示例: Recently, I have been sharing some furniture with my friends because we live together. I have many pieces, including a beautiful Indian charm, which they can use.
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và đại từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Dùng từ nối để liên kết ý.
示例: The first person I would like to share good news with is my older brother because he is very wise and always gives me useful advice when I tell him something.
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
分数: 45.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc diễn đạt ý chính một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.
示例: I usually share funny news with my friends, such as interesting experiences or popular things among children. I enjoy trying these things with my close friends.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)