电子书— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, correct vocabulary like 'boots' should be 'books'.

示例: I usually prefer paper books because I can concentrate better on them. For example, I recently tried reading an e-book on my phone, but I got distracted and couldn't finish it.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and use simple, correct sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

示例: I usually read online when I cannot find paper books nearby or when paper books are expensive. However, I find it hard to concentrate when reading online.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Avoid redundancy and be specific.

示例: I will definitely read more online in the future because physical books and newspapers are expensive. Also, online information is quick to find and often more reliable.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear words. Try to use correct vocabulary and explain clearly what you read online. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: I usually read news articles or quick information online. For example, I recently checked a database online to find out if a certain field was a primary key.

建议: Your answer has good points but needs better grammar and clearer sentences. Use linking words to compare and contrast. Avoid incomplete sentences.

示例: Reading online is different because I usually search for specific information and don't feel like reading deeply. However, with paper books, I can concentrate better and remember the content more easily.

× I usually prefer paper boots because.

✓ I usually prefer paper books because.

The sentence ends abruptly with a period after 'because', which is incomplete and causes sentence structure error. Also, 'boots' is a typo for 'books'. The sentence should be completed to explain the reason for preference.

× It is me too.

✓ Me too.

'It is me too' is incorrect because 'It is me' is not appropriate here. The correct expression to agree is simply 'Me too.'

× Manage concentrate on the paper only but.

✓ I can concentrate on the paper only.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, causing sentence structure error. Adding 'I can' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence.

× In the case of the book, I easily get distracted.

✓ In the case of the e-book, I easily get distracted.

The context suggests the student means 'e-book' rather than 'book' here. Correcting the noun clarifies the meaning.

× I started reading a book recently but I couldn't finish because it was in my phone and it was a ebook.

✓ I started reading a book recently but I couldn't finish it because it was on my phone and it was an e-book.

The sentence misses 'it' after 'finish' and uses incorrect preposition 'in' instead of 'on' for phone. Also, 'a ebook' should be 'an e-book' due to vowel sound at the start.

× I is already online claiming the paper bowls are so expensive and.

✓ I am already online claiming the paper books are so expensive.

'I is' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am'. Also, 'bowls' is a typo for 'books'. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or ended properly.

× I couldn't find them in near my apartment.

✓ I couldn't find them near my apartment.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near my apartment' without 'in'.

× Then I require all video online but it's kind of impossible for me to keep concentrate on line so I.

✓ Then I watch all videos online but it's kind of impossible for me to keep concentrating online.

'Require all video online' is incorrect; 'watch all videos online' fits better. Also, 'keep concentrate' should be 'keep concentrating'. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed.

× We don't usually do this, but it simply.

✓ We don't usually do this, but sometimes we do.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'but it simply' which is incomplete and causes sentence structure error. It should be completed to convey meaning.

× Is I will definitely read online more in the future.

✓ I will definitely read more online in the future.

'Is I will' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I will'. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.

× Because now it is the physical things or both are so expensive and you can find online information quickly and they're kind of reliable rather than a newspaper like you can force a newspaper at my door step that you can fall.

✓ Because now physical things or both are so expensive and you can find information online quickly and it's kind of reliable rather than a newspaper. Like, you can get a newspaper at my doorstep but it can fall.

The sentence is very confusing and contains pronoun misuse and sentence structure errors. 'It is the physical things or both' is unclear; 'it's kind of reliable' refers to information, so 'it' is singular. 'Force a newspaper' is incorrect; 'get a newspaper' is appropriate. The sentence is split for clarity.

× I usually get a muses articles or some quick information that I need individual and life.

✓ I usually get some music articles or some quick information that I need individually in life.

'A muses articles' is incorrect; 'some music articles' fits better. 'Individual and life' is unclear; 'individually in life' is more appropriate. Quantifiers and word choice are corrected.

× I watched it for example in hydro read database recently and I needed to check void that it's a primary key or not.

✓ For example, I recently used the Hydro Read database and I needed to check whether 'void' is a primary key or not.

The sentence is awkward and contains errors. 'Watched it' is incorrect; 'used' fits better. 'Hydro read database' is assumed to be a proper noun and capitalized. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I quickly checked online it and I got it.

✓ I quickly checked it online and I found the answer.

The phrase 'checked online it' is incorrect; the correct order is 'checked it online'. 'I got it' is vague; 'I found the answer' clarifies meaning.

× I think reading online free is different because I don't feel like reading when I'm.

✓ I think reading online for free is different because I don't feel like reading when I'm searching online.

'Reading online free' is incorrect; 'reading online for free' is correct. The sentence ends abruptly and is completed for clarity.

× Searching for something online but in paper I feel like I'm able to concentrate very quickly and I'm able to concentrate on the things I'm reading an act and keep image Ng on that things.

✓ When searching for something online, I don't feel like reading, but with paper, I feel like I'm able to concentrate very quickly and focus on the things I'm reading and keep imagining those things.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors like 'an act' and 'image Ng'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and corrected for word choice.