电子书— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I prefer paper books because they are easier to take notes on. Although e-books are convenient to carry when going outside, I find paper books more comfortable to read.

建议: 回答内容不完整，句子不连贯，缺少连接词和具体细节。建议完整表达时间和场合，使用连接词连接句子。

示例: I usually read online materials about once a month, especially for school assignments. I find the library more convenient and affordable for finding specific study materials.

建议: 表达有语法错误，句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，增加连接词使表达更自然。

示例: I probably won't read more online in the future because, although it is convenient and more accessible than libraries or bookstores, it can harm my eyes and makes taking notes difficult.

建议: 句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达阅读内容，避免语法错误。

示例: I like to read online when I don't need to take notes, such as browsing the internet or looking for quick information.

建议: 回答未完成，缺少具体细节和完整句子。建议补充完整观点，使用连接词，丰富内容。

示例: There are several differences between reading online and on paper. Firstly, reading on screens can harm our eyes if we concentrate too long. Secondly, it is easier to take notes when reading paper books.

× although e-books are convenient to bring when we are go outside and it is cleaner than borrow from.

✓ although e-books are convenient to bring when we go outside and it is cleaner than borrowing from.

这里动词短语中，'go' 应该用动名词形式 'going' 或直接用动词原形 'go'，但句中 'we are go' 是错误的结构，应改为 'we go'。另外，'borrow' 后面缺少动名词形式，应改为 'borrowing'。建议使用动名词形式来表示动作的持续或习惯。

× Borrow paper books from libraries.

✓ I borrow paper books from libraries.

该句缺少主语，导致句子结构不完整。英语句子必须包含主语和谓语，建议补充主语 'I' 使句子完整。

× Paper books are easy to take notes and we can know the.

✓ Paper books are easy to take notes on and we can understand the content better.

句子不完整，缺少介词和宾语，导致表达不清晰。'take notes' 后应加介词 'on'，并补充完整的宾语，建议补充 'understand the content better' 使句意完整。

× Things website or school.

✓ Things on websites or at school.

'website' 应为复数形式 'websites'，且缺少介词 'on'，'school' 前应加介词 'at'，以符合英语习惯表达。

× The library are more convenient and affordable to find more specific materials about study.

✓ The library is more convenient and affordable to find more specific materials for study.

主语 'The library' 是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式 'is'。另外，'about study' 应改为 'for study' 更符合搭配习惯。

× Although read online is convenient and it is more available than searching in the library or buying from the bookstores, it is harmful for our eyes and it it is difficult to take notes on.

✓ Although reading online is convenient and more accessible than searching in the library or buying from bookstores, it is harmful to our eyes and it is difficult to take notes on.

'read online' 应改为动名词形式 'reading online'。'more available' 应改为 'more accessible' 更合适。'harmful for' 应改为 'harmful to'。句中重复 'it' 应删除多余部分。

× I prefer read online when I don't have to take notes on or I just browse the Internet and seeing some shortcuts or anything does not really matter.

✓ I prefer reading online when I don't have to take notes or I just browse the Internet and see some shortcuts or anything that does not really matter.

'prefer' 后应接动名词 'reading'。'seeing' 应改为动词原形 'see'，因为前面有连词 'and' 连接两个并列动词。

× There are several differences between them.

✓ There are several differences between them.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Firstly, it is harmful to our eyes when we concentrate too much on screen when reading online.

✓ Firstly, it is harmful to our eyes when we concentrate too much on the screen while reading online.

缺少定冠词 'the' 修饰 'screen'，并且 'when reading online' 改为 'while reading online' 更加自然。

× Secondly, reading on paper is easier to take notes and.

✓ Secondly, reading on paper makes it easier to take notes.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，建议补充完整表达。