科学— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhul haru chan jasle arth bujhna garo parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra spashta tatha sahaj bhasha prayog garnu parcha. English ma sentence haru sahi tarikale banaunu parcha ra arth bujhna sajilo huna parcha.

示例: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because it helps me understand how the world works. For example, learning about natural phenomena makes me more curious and knowledgeable. I especially like reading science textbooks as they provide detailed explanations.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra tespachi thap bibaran dinu parcha jasle arth bujhna sajilo hos. Linking words jastai 'because', 'for example' prayog garnu hos.

示例: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily because science explains many things around us. For example, when I walk outside, I understand how plants grow and how weather changes. This knowledge helps me appreciate nature more.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra coherence ko kami cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran dinu parcha jasle arth bujhna sajilo hos. Linking words jastai 'because', 'also' prayog garnu hos ra sentence haru lai milayera bolnu hos.

示例: Yes, I would like to learn more about astronomy and physics because they help me understand the universe and space. Also, learning about weather forecasting interests me as it affects our daily life. These subjects make me more knowledgeable.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma spelling ra sentence structure ma thulo bhul chan jasle arth bujhna garo parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha ra spashta uttar dinu parcha. English ma sahi shabda ra sentence prayog garnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'because', 'therefore' prayog garnu hos.

示例: Yes, it is important for everyone to study science because it helps us understand how the world works and predict natural events. Therefore, learning science makes people wiser and better prepared for the future.

建议: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra thap bibaran dinu parcha jasle arth bujhna sajilo hos. Linking words jastai 'because', 'which' prayog garnu hos.

示例: Yes, I like watching science TV programs because they are exciting and teach me new information. For example, I learn about animals and space, which makes me more knowledgeable and curious.

× Yes, I definitely enjoy a loving science.

✓ Yes, I definitely enjoy science.

The adjective 'loving' is incorrectly used to describe 'science'. 'Science' is a subject and does not possess the quality of 'loving'. The correct sentence should simply state enjoyment of 'science'.

× Booger is cool as it gives me a larger view of world that all the world works and its mechanism.

✓ Science is cool as it gives me a broader view of the world and how it works and its mechanisms.

'Booger' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'science'. 'Larger view of world' is incorrect; 'broader view of the world' is appropriate. Also, 'all the world works' is incorrect; it should be 'how the world works'. 'Mechanism' should be plural 'mechanisms' to refer to various processes.

× Also reading signs makes me literate Anna better person and then I was before.

✓ Also, reading science makes me more literate and a better person than I was before.

'Signs' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'science'. 'Anna' is incorrect; it should be 'and a'. 'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I definitely use my science knowledge in a daily basis when walking out.

✓ Yes, I definitely use my science knowledge on a daily basis when going out.

The phrase 'in a daily basis' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on a daily basis'. 'Walking out' is awkward; 'going out' is more natural.

× Science is related to each and everything that is going on around the world.

✓ Science is related to everything that is going on around the world.

'Each and everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices.

× Therefore doing different work of physically and mentally.

✓ Therefore, I do different work both physically and mentally.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb form. The corrected sentence includes subject 'I' and verb 'do' and clarifies the meaning.

× I use signs in a daily basis.

✓ I use science on a daily basis.

'Signs' is incorrect; it should be 'science'. Also, 'in a daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'.

× Yes, there is a science subject that I love to learn.

✓ Yes, there is a science subject that I would love to learn.

The sentence is grammatically correct but adding 'would' makes it more natural when expressing desire.

× That is astronomy and physics, which makes me more engaged to the outside world.

✓ That is astronomy and physics, which make me more engaged with the outside world.

'Astronomy and physics' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'engaged to' should be 'engaged with'.

× Any space.

✓ About space.

'Any space' is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'about space'.

× Also learnings astronomy and physics makes me a more literate person.

✓ Also, learning astronomy and physics makes me a more literate person.

'Learnings' is incorrect; the gerund form 'learning' is correct. The verb 'makes' agrees with singular subject 'learning'.

× And about the weather forecasting that is.

✓ And also about weather forecasting.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. The correction provides a clearer phrase.

× Yes, it is definitely important for every person out there to learn about science because it is the basic material that abortions will know, which helps them to know how the.

✓ Yes, it is definitely important for every person out there to learn about science because it is the basic material that everyone should know, which helps them understand how the world works.

'Abortions' is a mishearing or typo for 'everyone'. The sentence was incomplete; it is corrected for clarity and meaning.

× World walks and the natural phenomena that is going to happen in the future.

✓ World works and the natural phenomena that are going to happen in the future.

'Walks' should be 'works'. 'Phenomena' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'.

× Therefore learning science makes a person more wiser.

✓ Therefore, learning science makes a person wiser.

'More wiser' is incorrect because 'wiser' is already a comparative adjective. 'More' is unnecessary.

× Yes, I love watching science TV programs as it is thrilling an makes me or more.

✓ Yes, I love watching science TV programs as they are thrilling and make me more

'It is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'programs'. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. 'Or more' is unclear and likely 'more'.

× Wiser as I watch it and helps me to know about the information that I am unaware of their four signs TV programs makes me a better person.

✓ wiser as I watch them and they help me learn information that I was unaware of. Therefore, science TV programs make me a better person.

Subject-verb agreement corrected: 'programs' plural requires 'make' not 'makes'. 'Their four signs' is unclear and corrected to 'science'. Sentence restructured for clarity.

× Mental is therefore.

✓ Mentally, therefore, I improve.

Original sentence fragment is incomplete and unclear. Correction provides a complete thought.