科学— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because I find experiments challenging and rewarding. For example, learning about physical and chemical properties helps me understand the world better.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题。建议使用完整句子，明确说明科学知识如何应用于日常生活，并避免模糊表达。

示例: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily. Since I majored in bioengineering, I understand which medicines are suitable when I am ill. Also, physics helps explain many everyday phenomena.

建议: 回答内容较好，但表达重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I would like to learn more about psychology because my future research focuses on how culture and social media affect nerve functions. Therefore, I need basic knowledge of neurobiology.

建议: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并避免语法错误。

示例: Yes, studying science is important because it explains many daily problems. Moreover, it helps us think critically and stimulates our brains to work faster.

建议: 回答表达不流畅，有语法错误和不完整句子。建议使用完整句子，明确表达喜好，并避免无关内容。

示例: It depends. I prefer watching science TV programs that explain topics in an interesting and easy-to-understand way. However, I don't enjoy boring programs.

× Yes, I felt satisfied after learning the knowledge about. Ph, physical, chemical mass. Oh. Get the right resource. After doing experiments, especially the process is much tough and challenging.

✓ Yes, I felt satisfied after learning knowledge about pH, physical and chemical mass. Getting the right resources and doing experiments, especially the process, is very tough and challenging.

原句句子结构混乱，断句不合理，导致表达不清晰。应将相关内容合并成完整句子，保持句子连贯性。

× Yes, I felt satisfied after learning the knowledge about. Ph, physical, chemical mass. Oh. Get the right resource. After doing experiments, especially the process is much tough and challenging.

✓ Yes, I feel satisfied after learning knowledge about pH, physical and chemical mass. Getting the right resources and doing experiments, especially the process, is very tough and challenging.

题目问的是一般情况，使用过去时felt不合适，应使用一般现在时feel表示习惯或普遍事实。

× As my major before was bio engineering.

✓ My previous major was bioengineering.

短语“major before”用法不当，应使用“previous major”表示之前的专业。

× So I know what kinds of medicine I have to take when I have disease.

✓ So I know what kinds of medicine I have to take when I have a disease.

“disease”前缺少冠词“a”，因为这里指的是某种疾病，需用单数可数名词形式。

× And for our daily life, frustrations are all based on professional physics knowledge.

✓ And in our daily life, functions are all based on professional physics knowledge.

“frustrations”用词错误，应为“functions”（功能）；介词“for”改为“in”更符合表达习惯。

× I think it must be psychology as my future research is about the relationship between cultural, social media contents with the nerves, nerves, functions.

✓ I think it must be psychology as my future research is about the relationship between cultural and social media content and nerve functions.

“contents”应为不可数名词“content”；“nerves, nerves, functions”重复且用词不当，应为“nerve functions”。

× I think it must be psychology as my future research is about the relationship between cultural, social media contents with the nerves, nerves, functions.

✓ I think it must be psychology as my future research is about the relationship between cultural and social media content and nerve functions.

介词“with”用错，应使用“and”连接两个并列名词短语。

× It helps me to think deeply about some questions and stimulate our brains to produce more fast.

✓ It helps me to think deeply about some questions and stimulates our brains to produce faster.

“stimulate”主语不一致，应为“stimulates”；“more fast”错误，应为副词“faster”。

× I prefer to watching science T V programs that the post explaining science in a very interesting and understanding ways.

✓ I prefer watching science TV programs that explain science in a very interesting and understandable way.

“prefer to watching”错误，应为“prefer watching”；“the post explaining”不通顺，应改为“that explain”；“understanding ways”应为形容词“understandable way”。

× But I don't like watching boring ones. Phone call numbers.

✓ But I don't like watching boring ones, such as phone call numbers.

“Phone call numbers”单独出现无意义，应补充说明或改为“such as phone call numbers”以表达举例。