网络— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
When did you start using the internet?
考生
I started accessing Internet in my high school around 2018.
考官
How often do you go online?
考生
I often go online like whenever I observe I have received any notification either on social media or either on uh regarding banks and financials. Either it it it would be on a e-mail.
考官
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
考生
It was a year ago when I went to my friend house and I was unable to catch Internet because in that area there was no Internet for Bell. So I hardly reach any Internet at that time.
考官
Do you think you spend too much time online?
考生
Yes, I believe so because I always spent like an hour as soon as I get up early in the morning and then later on I always spend time on social media to get updated about my friends, family, knowns.
考官
What would you do without the internet?
考生
Without Internet, I will prefer other tasks like other laser activities. For example, I would prefer exercise or maybe writing books around sitting around the lake.
评估
总分
Part 1
When did you start using the internet?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use 'the internet' instead of 'Internet' and say 'in high school' rather than 'in my high school'. Also, adding a bit more detail would improve your response.
示例: I started using the internet when I was in high school, around 2018, mainly for research and social media.
How often do you go online?
分数: 55.0建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains hesitations and repetitions. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically using linking words. Also, avoid filler words and be more specific about your online activities.
示例: I usually go online several times a day, especially when I receive notifications from social media, my bank, or emails.
Can you remember a time you weren’t allowed to use the internet?
分数: 60.0建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct prepositions and verb forms, and try to link your ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the situation.
示例: About a year ago, when I visited my friend's house, I couldn't access the internet because the Bell service was unavailable in that area.
Do you think you spend too much time online?
分数: 65.0建议: Your answer has some tense inconsistencies and could be clearer. Use consistent verb tenses and avoid vague words like 'knowns'. Also, try to connect your ideas with linking words for better flow.
示例: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I usually spend about an hour on my phone right after waking up, and later I check social media to keep up with my friends and family.
What would you do without the internet?
分数: 60.0建议: Your answer contains unclear phrases like 'laser activities' and awkward sentence structure. Try to use clear vocabulary and organize your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific about your alternative activities.
示例: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend my time doing other activities, such as exercising or writing while sitting by the lake.
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