语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免多余的词汇，并且使用更准确的时态和表达方式。

示例: I can speak Chinese as my native language. I have also learned English since it is a compulsory subject in school. Additionally, I have studied some Japanese at university, so I can speak a little Japanese.

建议: 回答中断断续续，句子不连贯，缺少连接词。建议使用连贯的句子结构，适当使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I find learning a new language very difficult because I struggle with vocabulary, pronunciation, and sentence structures. Moreover, it is hard for me to remember and fully understand these aspects.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达意图，避免重复，并注意语法正确。

示例: Yes, I plan to learn more languages in the future. For example, I started learning Japanese at university because I want to travel to Japan and understand Japanese news better.

建议: 回答表达混乱，句子不完整且重复。建议用完整且连贯的句子表达原因，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: I learned English because it is a compulsory subject in China. At first, I studied it because I had to, but now I realize that English is very useful, so I use it actively.

× Well, well, as a Chinese I could speak Chinese and the English is our necessary class, so I have to learn it after.

✓ Well, well, as a Chinese person I can speak Chinese and English is our compulsory class, so I have to learn it.

“as a Chinese”中“Chinese”应使用名词形式“Chinese person”表示“作为一个中国人”。“the English is our necessary class”中“necessary class”应改为“compulsory class”更符合习惯表达。

× Well, well, as a Chinese I could speak Chinese and the English is our necessary class, so I have to learn it after.

✓ Well, well, as a Chinese person I can speak Chinese and English is our compulsory class, so I have to learn it.

“could speak”表示过去能力，但这里应表达现在能力，故用“can speak”。

× Going to the university I learned a little bit knowledge about Japanese so I could speak some Japanese too.

✓ When I went to university, I learned a little about Japanese, so I can speak some Japanese too.

“Going to the university”应改为过去时“when I went to university”以符合时间顺序。“a little bit knowledge”应改为“a little knowledge”或“a bit of knowledge”。“could speak”应改为“can speak”表示现在能力。

× Going to the university I learned a little bit knowledge about Japanese so I could speak some Japanese too.

✓ When I went to university, I learned a little about Japanese, so I can speak some Japanese too.

“a little bit knowledge”中“knowledge”是不可数名词，不用加“bit”，应直接用“a little knowledge”。

× Going to the university I learned a little bit knowledge about Japanese so I could speak some Japanese too.

✓ When I went to university, I learned a little about Japanese, so I can speak some Japanese too.

“could speak”表示过去能力，但这里应表达现在能力，故用“can speak”。

× Yes, I think it is very difficult for me to learn a new language, no matter the vocabularies, the pronunciations. But the. Sentence structure, structures and so on.

✓ Yes, I think it is very difficult for me to learn a new language, no matter the vocabulary, the pronunciation, sentence structure, and so on.

“vocabularies”应为不可数名词“vocabulary”，“pronunciations”应为不可数名词“pronunciation”。“But the. Sentence structure, structures and so on.”句子结构混乱，应合并为一句完整句子。

× Yes, I think it is very difficult for me to learn a new language, no matter the vocabularies, the pronunciations.

✓ Yes, I think it is very difficult for me to learn a new language, no matter the vocabulary, the pronunciation.

“vocabularies”和“pronunciations”通常作为不可数名词使用，故应改为单数形式。

× But the. Sentence structure, structures and so on. Very difficult for me to remember and have a deep understanding, so it's difficult for me.

✓ Sentence structure and so on are very difficult for me to remember and understand deeply, so it's difficult for me.

原句断句错误，导致句子不完整，应合并并调整语序使句子通顺。

× Yes, of course. As I said, after going to the university I started to learn Japanese because I want to have a trip in Japan, in Japan.

✓ Yes, of course. As I said, after going to university I started to learn Japanese because I want to take a trip to Japan.

“want to have a trip in Japan”表达不自然，应改为“want to take a trip to Japan”。

× Yes, of course. As I said, after going to the university I started to learn Japanese because I want to have a trip in Japan, in Japan.

✓ Yes, of course. As I said, after going to university I started to learn Japanese because I want to take a trip to Japan.

“in Japan”应改为“to Japan”，表示目的地。

× In the future, so I want to learn more about the Japanese and the Japans News Coucher.

✓ In the future, I want to learn more about Japanese and Japanese news culture.

“the Japanese”应指“Japanese language”或“Japanese people”，此处应去掉定冠词。“Japans News Coucher”拼写错误，应为“Japanese news culture”。

× In the future, so I want to learn more about the Japanese and the Japans News Coucher.

✓ In the future, I want to learn more about Japanese and Japanese news culture.

“Japans News Coucher”拼写错误且用词不当，应改为“Japanese news culture”。

× Well, I have to see in the 1st. I learned English because I have to. I had to do it. I master do it.

✓ Well, at first, I learned English because I had to. I had to do it. I must do it.

“have to see in the 1st”表达不清，应改为“at first”。“master do it”错误，应为“must do it”。

× Well, I have to see in the 1st. I learned English because I have to. I had to do it. I master do it.

✓ Well, at first, I learned English because I had to. I had to do it. I must do it.

“have to”用于现在时，描述过去应使用“had to”。“master do it”应为“must do it”，表示必须。

× In China, the English is our necessary class.

✓ In China, English is our compulsory class.

“necessary class”表达不自然，应改为“compulsory class”表示必修课。

× I have no choice but. Now it is. I found English is useful, so I will use it by myself.

✓ I had no choice before. Now I find English is useful, so I will use it by myself.

“I have no choice but. Now it is.”句子不完整且时态混乱，应调整为“had no choice before”表示过去情况。