语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时句子较为零散，缺乏连贯性。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅，同时注意句子结构完整。

示例: I can speak Thai, Chinese, and English. I have been studying Thai for four years because it is my major at university. I really enjoy learning this language since it helps me understand the cultures and traditions of Thailand.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯的问题。建议注意单复数形式，避免句子碎片化，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think learning a new language can be quite challenging because it has different grammar rules and pronunciation. However, it also depends on your interests and efforts.

建议: 回答中句子断断续续，表达不连贯。建议避免使用短句断开，保持句子完整，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: No, I don't plan to learn other languages in the future because I prefer to focus on improving my Thai and English. Also, these two languages are sufficient for my work and daily life.

建议: 回答句子结构不完整，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，合理使用连接词，并注意词汇搭配的准确性。

示例: I learn English because I like diverse cultures, and I want to communicate fluently with native speakers. Moreover, English is a global language nowadays.

× Yes, I think learning a new languages can be quite challenging because it has different grammar.

✓ Yes, I think learning a new language can be quite challenging because it has different grammar.

这里的“languages”应为单数“language”，因为前面有不定冠词“a”，表示单一的语言。

× Rulers and pronunciation.

✓ Rules and pronunciation.

原句中“Rulers”应为“Rules”，且该句为不完整句，应与前句合并或补充完整。

× No, I don't plan to learn other languages in the future. Because I prefer to focusing on improving Thai and English.

✓ No, I don't plan to learn other languages in the future because I prefer to focus on improving Thai and English.

“Because”不应单独成句，应与前句合并；“prefer to focusing”中“to”后应接动词原形“focus”，而非动名词“focusing”。

× And. Also. These two languages are. Sufficient for my work and daily.

✓ Also, these two languages are sufficient for my work and daily life.

原句断句不当，应合并为完整句；“daily”应为“daily life”以表达完整意思。

× Because I like diversity cultures.

✓ Because I like diverse cultures.

“diversity”是名词，修饰“cultures”应使用形容词“diverse”。

× And learning English in order to. Communicate with native people. Fluently.

✓ And I learn English in order to communicate fluently with native people.

原句断句不当，缺少主语，应合并为完整句；“fluently”应放在动词“communicate”之后。

× And now it's global.

✓ And now it's a global language.

“global”是形容词，需加名词“language”构成完整表达。