语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够完整，缺少对问题的直接回应和具体说明。建议直接回答自己会说的语言，并简要说明。

示例: I can speak English and a little bit of Spanish because I studied them at school.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并给出原因。

示例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of practice and patience.

建议: 回答不连贯，句子不完整。建议用完整句子表达意图，并说明原因。

示例: Yes, I want to learn English because I plan to travel to America and communicate with people there.

建议: 回答语法错误，表达不清楚。建议用完整句子说明学习英语的原因。

示例: I learn English because I work for an American company, so I need it for my job.

× Yes, I'm I'm I'm a Sakwa. So it's a it's a difficult to learn a new language.

✓ Yes, I'm a Sakwa. So it's difficult to learn a new language.

句子中多余的冠词“a”导致表达不自然，应去掉。"difficult"前不需要冠词。

× I want to learn English because I want to play. Go to America to play.

✓ I want to learn English because I want to go to America to play.

“play”后面不应单独成句，应与“go to America”连贯表达。原句中断句错误，导致意思不清。

× Because our job I work in AUSA company.

✓ Because of my job, I work in AUSA company.

“Because our job I work...”结构不完整，缺少介词短语，应改为“Because of my job”引导原因状语。