语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语言表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并注意语法一致性。

示例: I can speak Cantonese, English, and my mother tongue, Chinese. Knowing multiple languages helps people communicate more comfortably and improves cross-cultural skills.

建议: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够连贯，且部分用词不准确。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并准确表达语言学习的四个方面。

示例: Learning a new language is quite challenging because it involves four skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing. You also need to build a strong vocabulary and understand grammar rules.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够清晰。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用恰当的词汇。

示例: Yes, I plan to learn English in the future. It is challenging because it requires mastering four key skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing. For example, having a strong vocabulary and good grammar helps communicate effectively. Also, practicing regularly by reading books or talking with native speakers is important.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达重复且不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用准确的词汇。

示例: I want to learn English because it is a global language that opens many opportunities. Although it is challenging, mastering listening, speaking, reading, and writing skills is essential. For example, a strong vocabulary and good grammar help me communicate clearly.

× I can speak Cantonese and English 2 languages and then also my mother tongue Chinese.

✓ I can speak two languages, Cantonese and English, and also my mother tongue, Chinese.

这里“English 2 languages”表达不正确，应该用数字+名词的正确顺序，且“languages”前应有数量词“two”。建议将句子调整为“two languages, Cantonese and English”。

× it cultivate our cross cultural communication skills.

✓ it cultivates our cross-cultural communication skills.

动词“cultivate”需要第三人称单数形式“cultivates”，且“cross cultural”应为复合形容词“cross-cultural”，中间用连字符连接。

× you need to learn 4 parts of language such as learning, speaking, writing and reading.

✓ you need to learn four parts of the language such as listening, speaking, writing, and reading.

数字应写为英文单词“four”，且“parts of language”应为“parts of the language”。另外，“learning”应改为“listening”，因为语言的四个部分通常是听、说、读、写。

× Probably you need to have a good vocabulary and grammar.

✓ Probably you need to have a good vocabulary and good grammar.

“grammar”前缺少形容词“good”，以保持与“vocabulary”并列结构一致。

× Learning English can be quite challenging because it involves nothing for key skills, listening, speaking, reading and writing.

✓ Learning English can be quite challenging because it involves four key skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing.

“nothing for key skills”表达错误，应为“four key skills”，表示英语学习涉及四个关键技能。

× Additionally, practicing regularly by reading books or speaking with native speakers.

✓ Additionally, practicing regularly by reading books or speaking with native speakers is important.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整。应补充谓语使句子完整。

× Learning English is challenging since it requires nothing awful skills listening, speaking, reading, and writing.

✓ Learning English is challenging since it requires four essential skills: listening, speaking, reading, and writing.

“nothing awful skills”表达错误，应为“four essential skills”，表示英语学习需要四项基本技能。