语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达方式，例如将“my mother language”改为“my mother tongue”，并且注意冠词和时态的使用。

示例: My mother tongue is Chinese. I have been learning English for nearly ten years, and I also took Japanese lessons at university as my second foreign language.

建议: 回答表达较为重复且有语法错误，如“are tend to”应为“tend to”，建议使用连贯的句子并避免重复，同时使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I think learning a new language is difficult if we are not surrounded by it, because we tend to speak our mother tongue instead of the foreign language.

建议: 回答中表达不够准确，语法错误较多，如“South Korean things”应具体指语言，“have a basic language about South Korean”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

示例: I plan to learn some basic Korean because it will be convenient when I travel there and help me live more comfortably.

建议: 回答不完整且语法混乱，缺乏逻辑和具体内容。建议直接回答问题，说明学习英语的原因，并使用完整句子。

示例: I learn English because it is widely used around the world, and I started studying it from primary school to improve my communication skills.

× My mother language is Chinese and I learned English for nearly ten years and I have a second foreign language lessons from university about the Japanese.

✓ My mother tongue is Chinese and I have learned English for nearly ten years and I have second foreign language lessons from university about Japanese.

“mother language”应为“mother tongue”，表示母语；“lessons”前的冠词应去掉或改为复数形式；“the Japanese”应改为“Japanese”，表示语言。

× I would say that if we are not in that language context or or surrounded by that language, it is difficult to learn it as we are tend to speak in our mother tongue rather than foreign language.

✓ I would say that if we are not in that language context or surrounded by that language, it is difficult to learn it as we tend to speak in our mother tongue rather than a foreign language.

“are tend to”应改为“tend to”，因为“tend to”后接动词原形；“foreign language”前应加冠词“a”。

× I plan to learn a little bit about South Korean things. It is convenient to have a trip over there and have a basic language about South Korean can help us to live more convenient and efficiently.

✓ I plan to learn a little bit about South Korean culture. It is convenient to take a trip over there and having basic knowledge of Korean can help us live more conveniently and efficiently.

“South Korean things”表达不准确，应为“South Korean culture”；“have a trip”应改为“take a trip”；“have a basic language about South Korean”表达不清，应改为“having basic knowledge of Korean”；“live more convenient”应改为“live more conveniently”，副词修饰动词。

× I learn English because they are. When we started from primary school and English language is popular used among the world wild, which is.

✓ I learn English because it is important. We started learning it from primary school and English is popularly used worldwide.

“they are”指代不明，应改为“it is important”；“English language is popular used”应改为“English is popularly used”；“world wild”应为“worldwide”。