语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa shizen de, jikan no seigen ni yori 3-5 bun no nagasa de, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete kudasai. Motto meikaku na setsumei to rikai o fukameru tame ni, renraku kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

示例: I can speak English and Hindi fluently because I have studied them since childhood. Additionally, Nepali is my mother tongue, so I use it daily. I also know a little Sanskrit, but I am not very confident in speaking it yet.

建议: Kotae no naka de, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya jikan no muri na tsukaimichi o sakete, motto meikaku na bunshou o tsukutte kudasai. Renraku kotoba o tsukatte, rikai o takameru setsumei o shite kudasai.

示例: I think learning a new language depends on the learner's dedication and age. Younger people usually learn faster because they have more time and flexibility. However, older people may find it more difficult due to less exposure and memory challenges.

建议: Kotae wa chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete, fukusetsu na jisho o tsukatte, meikaku de rikai shi yasui bunshou o tsukutte kudasai. Fuyou na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wa sakete kudasai.

示例: I want to become fluent in Sanskrit because I already know a little. Also, I am planning to learn German since it is spoken in many European countries, about seven or eight, which interests me.

建议: Kotae wa motto seikaku ni shite, chokusetsu shitsumon ni kotaete kudasai. Renraku kotoba o tsukatte, rikai o takameru tame ni, riyuu o meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: I learn English because it is an important part of the school curriculum, which helps me improve my skills. Moreover, English is widely used around the world, so it is useful for communication and opportunities.

× I believe that the time and the younger generation can learn is very quickly.

✓ I believe that the younger generation can learn very quickly.

The original sentence has an unclear and incorrect structure. 'The time and the younger generation can learn is very quickly' is grammatically incorrect. The phrase 'the time' is unnecessary here and disrupts the sentence. The corrected sentence removes 'the time' and uses the present tense correctly to express the idea that younger people learn quickly.

× On the other hand, the old age group find it very difficult.

✓ On the other hand, the old age group finds it very difficult.

'The old age group' is a singular noun phrase, so the verb should be singular 'finds' instead of 'find'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× Well I know little in Sanskrit but I want to be very fluent in it.

✓ Well, I know a little Sanskrit but I want to be very fluent in it.

The phrase 'know little in Sanskrit' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'know a little Sanskrit' to indicate some knowledge. Also, 'a little' is used with uncountable nouns like 'Sanskrit'.

× Similarly I am thinking of learning German language because this language is very famous or Hindi Europe I I have come to know about 7 to 8 countries this.

✓ Similarly, I am thinking of learning the German language because it is very popular in Europe. I have come to know about 7 to 8 countries where it is spoken.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing articles ('the German language'), incorrect prepositions ('or Hindi Europe' is unclear), and sentence structure problems. The correction clarifies the meaning, uses correct prepositions, and adds necessary articles.

× When we have a lot of curriculum related to English while we are studying in school with indirectly or directly help me to be fluent in English, I believe it is so widely used over the world so.

✓ When we have a lot of curriculum related to English while studying in school, it indirectly or directly helps me to be fluent in English. I believe it is widely used all over the world.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition use and awkward phrasing. 'With indirectly or directly help me' is incorrect; it should be 'it indirectly or directly helps me'. Also, 'over the world so' is corrected to 'all over the world' for natural expression.