语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp: trả lời trực tiếp, tránh thừa từ và sửa thứ tự từ. Hãy dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ ngắn gọn (ví dụ: cách học hoặc tần suất). Chú ý động từ và đại từ (ví dụ: “I can speak English” thay vì “This language I can speak English”).

示例: I can speak English. I study it every day to improve, mainly by listening to podcasts and practicing speaking with friends, so I’m excited to talk with you today.

建议: Sắp xếp ý rõ ràng và dùng từ liên kết hợp lý: mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề về quan điểm của bạn, sau đó giải thích nguyên nhân bằng cách liệt kê ngắn gọn với liên từ (because, for example). Tránh lặp từ và dùng danh từ/động từ đúng (grammar, pronunciation, skills).

示例: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because you must master grammar, pronunciation and communication skills. For example, I often struggle with speaking fluently and remembering new vocabulary.

建议: Trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng về kế hoạch tương lai: dùng thì tương lai đơn đúng (I will learn), giải thích lý do cụ thể và cách bạn sẽ học (methods). Tránh lặp và sửa lỗi từ (opportunity, children).

示例: Yes, I will learn other languages in the future. I plan to study Spanish because it will give me more opportunities at school and to communicate with more people; I’ll practise by listening to podcasts and taking weekly classes.

建议: Nói rõ mục đích và thêm ví dụ cụ thể: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (I learn English because...), nêu lợi ích cụ thể (career, travel, study) và cách bạn đang thực hiện (how). Tránh từ thừa (“international worldwide”), và hạn chế tiếng lắp.

示例: I learn English because it is an international language that opens up study and job opportunities worldwide. For example, I practise every day by watching English videos and speaking with classmates to improve my fluency.

× This language I can speak English.

✓ I can speak English.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. In English, the typical structure is Subject + Verb + Object. Move 'This language' or omit it; saying 'I can speak English' is clear and correct.

× Every day I try to my best to improve my English, so I'm so excited to talk about it to you.

✓ Every day I try my best to improve my English, so I'm excited to talk about it with you.

Use 'try my best' rather than 'try to my best'. Also use the preposition 'with' after 'talk about it' when indicating the person you are speaking to. 'So' before 'excited' once is sufficient.

× I think it will be difficult it to learn a new language, a new language send grammar, pronunciation, skilled and I need to learn it always, so it's so difficult for me.

✓ I think it will be difficult to learn a new language because of grammar, pronunciation, and skills, and I always need to study, so it is difficult for me.

Remove the extra pronoun 'it' after 'difficult'. Use 'because of' to link the reason and list items with commas and 'and'. 'Skills' is a better noun than 'skilled' here. Use 'always need to study' instead of 'need to learn it always' and avoid repeating 'so'.

× Yes, I in the future, I will learn another language English because it's a opportunity in school and child in the future.

✓ Yes, in the future I will learn another language, such as English, because it is an opportunity for school and for my child in the future.

Place 'in the future' before the clause for clarity. Use 'such as' to give an example. Use the article 'an' only before vowel sounds; 'an opportunity' is correct, but the sentence needs restructuring: 'an opportunity for school and for my child'. Ensure consistent future reference.

× Uh, for example, uh, I tried, uh, improved my English everyday live listening.

✓ For example, I try to improve my English every day by listening.

Use present tense 'try' for habitual actions. 'Tried, improved' is past and inconsistent. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb); use 'every day'. Use 'by listening' to indicate the method (verb + -ing form correctly used after 'by').

× Because English is an international worldwide language, uh, it will open up career and job in the future opportunities.

✓ Because English is an international language, it will open up career and job opportunities in the future.

'International' and 'worldwide' are redundant; choose one. Use the plural 'opportunities' and place 'in the future' at the end. 'Career and job opportunities' is the correct collocation. Remove filler words.

× For example, I tried to improve my English every day.

✓ For example, I try to improve my English every day.

Maintain present tense for habitual actions. 'Tried' is past tense and conflicts with 'every day' as a regular activity; use 'try' to express ongoing effort.