语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm ý không rõ và hơi dài dòng. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (I speak Vietnamese and English.), sửa ngữ pháp (native language, grammatical points), tránh sử dụng từ thừa như “Wow” trong bài thi, và giới hạn 2–3 câu. Ngoài ra hãy thêm một chi tiết cụ thể ngắn để chứng minh (ví dụ: học từ vựng chuyên ngành).

示例: I speak Vietnamese, which is my native language, and English. I sometimes find English difficult because I need to memorize long lists of vocabulary and grammatical points. For example, technical terms for my studies are especially hard to remember.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp (agree with you more, very challenge, vocabularies). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes, I think it can be difficult.) rồi giải thích cụ thể với liên từ (because, for example). Sửa từ sai (vocabulary, challenging) và dùng 2–3 câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: Yes, I think learning a new language can be challenging because grammar and vocabulary are often very different from your native tongue. For example, I struggle with verb tenses and word order when I study English.

建议: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lựa từ không tự nhiên (offered, merits, career ladders). Hãy dùng thì tương lai cho câu hỏi về kế hoạch (I will/plan to), sửa cấu trúc (not only... but also) và nêu ví dụ cụ thể về ngôn ngữ bạn muốn học hoặc cách học (ứng dụng, khóa học). Giữ 2–3 câu súc tích.

示例: Yes, I will definitely learn other languages in the future. For example, I plan to study Spanish because it could improve my job prospects and also sharpen my memory through regular practice.

建议: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và có ví dụ, nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (As I were saying → As I said, without worry → without worrying). Có thể làm mạch lạc hơn bằng cách bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ ngành nghề, địa điểm du lịch). Giữ độ dài 2–3 câu.

示例: As I mentioned, I learn English mainly to advance my career and communicate with international clients. For example, in my job I often negotiate with overseas partners, and knowing English also makes traveling and sightseeing abroad much easier.

× I can speak 2 languages, Vietnamese, what is my native language and English.

✓ I can speak two languages: Vietnamese, which is my native language, and English.

Use plural number words in writing (two). Use a colon to list and a relative clause 'which is my native language' to clarify; ensure nouns agree and punctuation separates items. Suggestion: write out small numbers as words, use commas/colons correctly, and use relative clauses for clarity.

× I sometimes find learning English is a bit difficult since I have to memorize long list of new vocabularies and grammatical point.

✓ I sometimes find learning English a bit difficult since I have to memorize long lists of new vocabulary and grammatical points.

'Long list' should be plural 'long lists' if referring to many lists, or better 'a long list' if singular; 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun (not 'vocabularies'); 'grammatical point' should be plural 'grammatical points'. Suggestion: use 'vocabulary' as uncountable and make other nouns agree in number.

× Yeah, I can agree with you more.

✓ Yeah, I agree with you.

'Can agree with you more' is awkward; simple present 'I agree with you' expresses agreement. Modal 'can' is unnecessary and 'more' is unclear. Suggestion: use direct present-tense verbs for states/opinions.

× I'm fine learning a new language.

✓ I'm fine with learning a new language.

Missing preposition 'with' after 'fine' to link the noun phrase. Without it the sentence is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use common adjective+preposition combinations (fine with, good at).

× Very challenge since you have to memorize new vocabularies and grammar structures that totally different from your native language.

✓ It's very challenging since you have to memorize new vocabulary and grammar structures that are totally different from your native language.

Use adjective form 'challenging' rather than noun 'challenge' and include subject 'It' with verb 'is'. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect; use uncountable 'vocabulary'. 'That totally different' lacks verb 'are'. Suggestion: ensure correct adjective forms and include appropriate auxiliaries/verbs.

× learning a different language offered me numerous merits.

✓ learning a different language offers me numerous benefits.

Tense mismatch: use present 'offers' for general truth. 'Offered' is past. Also 'merits' is less natural; 'benefits' is preferred. Suggestion: use simple present for general statements and choose natural collocations.

× It's not only allow me to advance my career ladders, but also help me to sharpen my memory.

✓ It not only allows me to advance my career, but also helps me sharpen my memory.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires 'allows' and 'helps'. Remove 'to' after 'helps' in this structure. 'Career ladders' is awkward; use 'career' or 'career prospects'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subject and follow correct parallel structure.

× As I were saying, learning a language offers a lot of advantages.

✓ As I was saying, learning a language offers a lot of advantages.

Use past continuous 'was saying' for reporting previous speech; 'were' is incorrect for singular first person here. Suggestion: use 'was saying' for I/he/she singular.

× It helps me to advance my career.

✓ It helps me advance my career.

Both 'helps me to advance' and 'helps me advance' are acceptable, but omitting 'to' is more natural in informal speech; keep consistency. Suggestion: prefer concise forms in simple statements.

× For instance, I can communicate with international clients without worry about language barriers.

✓ For instance, I can communicate with international clients without worrying about language barriers.

Use gerund 'worrying' after 'without' to show the action; 'without worry about' is less natural. Suggestion: use 'without' + gerund for actions not done.

× Besides, I can travel abroad and go sightseeing.

✓ Besides, I can travel abroad and go sightseeing.

Sentence is acceptable; no grammatical correction needed. Provided here only for completeness. Suggestion: none.