语言— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetitions (e.g., “language” repeated) and minor grammar issues. Use linking words like “also” and “in addition” to connect ideas and shorten the response to 3–4 sentences.

示例: I speak several languages: Punjabi (my native language), English and Hindi fluently. I have also recently started learning Sanskrit and read sacred texts to practice it, so I’m improving steadily.

建议: Correct grammar errors and remove repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, it can be difficult), then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” or “for instance”). Avoid filler phrases like “like” and redundant phrases.

示例: Yes, learning a new language can be difficult because you must master grammar, vocabulary and pronunciation. For example, without immersion and regular practice, it’s hard to use words naturally in conversation.

建议: Use correct names and fix spacing/grammar. Start with a direct statement (Yes, I will) and give a specific reason and plan. Replace vague words with precise ones and use linking words like “because” and “so”.

示例: Yes, I plan to learn more languages. For instance, I want to learn French because I hope to travel to Quebec in Canada, and speaking French would make travel and meeting locals much easier.

建议: Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and remove hesitations (“uh”). Give a concise topic sentence and one clear specific example. Use linking words like “for example” and avoid vague claims such as “any nation and island.”

示例: I learn English because it is an international language used for business and travel. For example, when I visit a country where people speak another tongue, English often serves as a common language for communication.

× it is very daunting task to learn task to learn a new language.

✓ it is a very daunting task to learn a new language.

Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun 'task' causes singular/plural/article error. Add 'a' to make 'a very daunting task'.

× I have been learning Sanskrit for several weeks.

✓ I have been learning Sanskrit for several weeks.

Sentence is correct as written; present perfect continuous 'have been learning' is appropriate for an action started in the past and still ongoing. No change needed.

× I am an avid reader of sacred books in Sanskrit language and it has influenced me to take up Sanskrit.

✓ I am an avid reader of sacred books in the Sanskrit language and it has influenced me to take up Sanskrit.

The phrase 'Sanskrit language' normally takes the definite article 'the' when described as 'the Sanskrit language'. Use 'the Sanskrit language' to be idiomatic.

× there is a particular grammar or the words or the pronunciation which is required for like learning a new language.

✓ there is particular grammar, words, and pronunciation that are required for learning a new language.

Unnecessary articles and filler words ('the', 'like') make the phrase ungrammatical. Use plural 'words' and treat 'grammar, words, and pronunciation' as plural subject requiring 'are'. Remove 'like' and unnecessary 'the'.

× I am always interested in learning new language.

✓ I am always interested in learning a new language.

Missing article 'a' before 'new language' is an article/preposition-related error; use 'a new language'.

× I would like to learn French because I am interested in travelling to Canada, specifically Cubic which is a French speaking province.

✓ I would like to learn French because I am interested in travelling to Canada, specifically Quebec, which is a French-speaking province.

Proper noun 'Quebec' was misspelled as 'Cubic'. 'French-speaking' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective modifying 'province'.

× Being able to speak French would makemytrip so much easier and more enjoyable, so I am motivated to learn the language.

✓ Being able to speak French would make my trip so much easier and more enjoyable, so I am motivated to learn the language.

Missing space between 'make' and 'my' created 'makemytrip'. Also ensure 'would make' (modal + base verb) is correct; add space and separate words.

× One of the compelling reason of mine to learn English language is it's an international language which can be understand in any nation and island.

✓ One of my compelling reasons to learn English is that it is an international language that can be understood in any country or island.

Multiple issues: 'reason' should be plural 'reasons' to match 'one of my ... reasons' (singular/plural), 'of mine' is awkward—use 'my', add 'the' before 'English language' or omit 'language', use 'it is' instead of contraction 'it's' for clarity, and 'can be understand' should be passive past participle 'can be understood'. Also 'nation' changed to 'country' for naturalness and use 'or' between 'country or island'.

× For example, if I have to go to a country where, uh, their mother tongue is, uh, I can say French, but English is a language which can be understand.

✓ For example, if I have to go to a country where the mother tongue is French, English is a language that can be understood.

'their mother tongue is' is awkward when followed by 'I can say French'; restructure to 'where the mother tongue is French'. Replace 'which can be understand' with 'that can be understood' using the past participle 'understood' for passive construction. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant phrase 'I can say'.

× I am proficient in several languages.

✓ I am proficient in several languages.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present simple 'am proficient' correctly describes a current state. No change needed.

× I am a native speaker of Punjabi and I can also speak English and Hindi fluently.

✓ I am a native speaker of Punjabi, and I can also speak English and Hindi fluently.

Minor punctuation: add a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses for readability. Grammar and verb usage are correct.

× While I'm not yet fluent, I am making steady progress.

✓ While I'm not yet fluent, I am making steady progress.

Present continuous 'am making' correctly indicates ongoing progress. Sentence is correct.

× On top of that, I have been learning Sanskrit for several weeks.

✓ On top of that, I have been learning Sanskrit for several weeks.

Sentence is correct as written; no article needed before 'Sanskrit'.