蛋糕— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz daha yapılandırılmış ve akıcı olabilir. "And with raspberries" ifadesi cümlenin sonunda aniden geliyor ve bağlaç kullanımı eksik. Daha fazla detay ve bağlaç kullanarak cevabınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy sweet foods, especially brownies because I absolutely adore chocolate. Moreover, I like them when they are paired with raspberries, which add a nice tartness.

建议: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "I will try to try it" ifadesi yerine daha doğal bir ifade kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha doğru kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

示例: I'm not familiar with traditional Chinese cakes because I've never been to China. However, if I have the chance, I would definitely like to try them since I enjoy exploring new dishes.

建议: Cümlenizde gereksiz tekrarlar ve bağlaç hataları var. "But I however I suggest" ifadesi karışık. Daha net ve akıcı cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevabınızı biraz daha detaylandırabilirsiniz.

示例: Actually, I'm not a great cook, but if necessary, I can make a cake. However, I wouldn't recommend eating it because I'm still learning.

建议: Cevabınız açık ve anlaşılır ancak biraz daha özgünlük ve detay ekleyebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, "like to eat cakes" ifadesini daha doğal hale getirebilirsiniz.

示例: Yes, I loved eating cakes as a child because of their sweet and rich flavors. I believe most children enjoy cakes, and I was no exception.

建议: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. "Avoid it from my everyday life" yerine daha doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğal hale getirmek için bağlaçlar ekleyebilirsiniz.

示例: I really enjoy desserts, but I'm trying to avoid them in my daily diet because they can harm my skin and negatively affect my blood health.

× Yeah, I like sweet food so much and I love brownies because I literally adore chocolates. And with raspberries.

✓ Yeah, I like sweet food so much and I love brownies because I literally adore chocolate. And with raspberries.

The word 'chocolates' is plural, but here it refers to the substance in general, so the uncountable noun 'chocolate' should be used instead.

× I don't know about Chinese cakes because I have never been in China, but if there is a traditional Chinese cake, I will try to try it. Hence I like to try new dishes.

✓ I don't know about Chinese cakes because I have never been to China, but if there is a traditional Chinese cake, I will try it. Hence, I like to try new dishes.

The correct preposition with 'been' when referring to visiting a place is 'to' not 'in'. Also, 'try to try it' is redundant; 'try it' is sufficient. A comma after 'Hence' improves sentence clarity.

× Actually I am not a wonderful cook, but if I have to of course I can do it. But I however I suggest you not to eat it.

✓ Actually, I am not a wonderful cook, but if I have to, of course I can do it. However, I suggest you not eat it.

The phrase 'if I have to of course I can do it' needs commas for clarity. 'But I however' is redundant; 'However' alone is sufficient. Also, 'suggest you not to eat it' should be 'suggest you not eat it' because 'suggest' is followed by the base verb without 'to'.

× Yeah, of course I like to eat cakes. I like the flavor of the cakes, and I'm pretty sure that every child likes to eat cakes.

✓ Yeah, of course I liked to eat cakes. I liked the flavor of the cakes, and I'm pretty sure that every child likes to eat cakes.

The question is about the past ('Did you like... as a child?'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked' to match the time frame.

× I am really into desserts but I'm trying to avoid it from my everyday life because I know it poisons my skin and it's uh, negative for my blood too so I don't really want to eat it.

✓ I am really into desserts but I'm trying to avoid them in my everyday life because I know they harm my skin and are, uh, bad for my blood too, so I don't really want to eat them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'desserts' (plural), so 'them' should be used. Also, 'avoid it from my everyday life' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in'. 'Poisons my skin' is better expressed as 'harm my skin', and 'negative for my blood' should be 'bad for my blood' for naturalness.