笑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer has good ideas but it lacks clarity and fluency. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the benefits of laughter with specific details.

示例: I believe laughter plays an important role in daily life because it improves our blood circulation and boosts our mood. Moreover, laughing regularly helps reduce stress and promotes overall well-being.

建议: Your answer needs better sentence structure and fluency. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, such as why the movie was funny or what made you laugh. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: The last time I laughed was a couple of months ago when I went to the cinema with my family. We watched a popular comedy movie called '3 Idiots', which had many funny scenes that made me laugh a lot.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains contradictions. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar. Use a topic sentence followed by reasons or examples. Avoid repeating the same idea unnecessarily.

示例: I don't think I can easily make other people laugh because I am not good at telling jokes. Usually, I prefer to listen and enjoy others' humour rather than being the one who makes jokes.

建议: Your answer has good points but the language is confusing and some words are incorrect. Use simple and correct vocabulary. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected by linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

示例: Yes, I definitely enjoy watching funny movies because they are very entertaining. Besides, watching comedies helps me reduce stress and break the monotony of my daily routine, allowing me to refresh my mind.

× if people laugh in a daily life a lot

✓ if people laugh a lot in daily life

The phrase 'in a daily life' is incorrect; 'daily life' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'in daily life' or simply 'in daily life a lot'.

× laughter is accessible for our body

✓ laughter is accessible to our body

The correct preposition to use with 'accessible' is 'to', not 'for'. So, it should be 'accessible to our body'.

× if people allow for, for a whole day, then it provides positive

✓ if people laugh for a whole day, then it provides positive effects

The phrase 'allow for, for a whole day' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'if people laugh for a whole day'. Also, 'provides positive' is incomplete; it should be 'provides positive effects' or 'provides positivity'.

× I clearly remembered that a couple of months ago I go, I went to cinema with my family

✓ I clearly remember that a couple of months ago I went to the cinema with my family

The verb 'remember' should be in present tense 'remember' to indicate a current memory. Also, 'go' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Cinema' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× And the name of movie is 3 idiot

✓ And the name of the movie is 3 Idiots

The phrase 'name of movie' requires the definite article 'the' before 'movie'. Also, the movie title should be correctly capitalized as '3 Idiots'.

× I have a capability to make other people laugh because I'm not a personality who crack a joke

✓ I do not have the capability to make other people laugh because I'm not a person who cracks jokes

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I have a capability' instead of 'I do not have the capability'. 'Personality' is incorrect here; 'person' is appropriate. Also, 'who crack a joke' should be 'who cracks jokes' to agree with singular subject and plural object.

× So that other person laughed at my jokes

✓ So other people do not laugh at my jokes

The phrase 'So that other person laughed' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely that others do not laugh at the speaker's jokes, so it should be 'So other people do not laugh at my jokes'.

× I love to voucher for new movies

✓ I love to watch new movies

The word 'voucher' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'watch'. Also, 'love to watch' is the correct phrase.

× funny movies are quite a fascinating

✓ funny movies are quite fascinating

The phrase 'quite a fascinating' is incorrect because 'fascinating' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a' here. The correct phrase is 'quite fascinating'.

× Apart from this weather assist of watching funny movies

✓ Apart from this, whether it is watching funny movies

The phrase 'weather assist of watching' is incorrect and unclear. The intended phrase is likely 'whether it is watching funny movies'.

× I can not only reduce my stressor but it also reduced my monotonous lifestyle

✓ I can not only reduce my stress but it also reduces my monotonous lifestyle

'Stressor' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'stress'. Also, the verb tense should be consistent: 'reduce' and 'reduces' in present tense to match 'can'.

× as I can get a chance to rejuvenate my mind from this boring lifestyle

✓ as I can get a chance to rejuvenate my mind from this boring lifestyle

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.