道路— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "dead and alley" instead of "dead-end alley" and "less traffic" instead of "less traffic congestion". Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy like "always are quiet and also peaceful"; one adjective is enough. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

示例: No, the roads near my home are not busy because it is located in a quiet, dead-end alley within a secluded neighbourhood. Most people prefer walking here, so traffic is minimal and the area feels peaceful.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward word choices, such as "footbridge" plural without article and "footprint" instead of "footbridge". Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence, for example, "however" or "although". Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity.

示例: Yes, people do cross the roads in my city because traffic is light, making it safe. Although there are footbridges available, most people avoid them as they find them time-consuming and prefer crossing directly, which is more convenient for them.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, with grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. You should directly describe the current condition of the roads first, then suggest improvements. Use complete sentences and avoid fragments. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

示例: The roads in my city are quite worn out and in need of repair, which affects safety for drivers and pedestrians. Therefore, I think the mayor should add bicycle lanes and pedestrian walkways, and invest in maintaining the existing roads to improve overall safety.

建议: Your answer repeats previous points and contains grammatical errors such as "need to be improvement" instead of "need improvement". Try to avoid redundancy and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to structure your answer clearly and provide specific suggestions.

示例: Yes, I believe the roads need improvement. Officials should add bicycle lanes and pedestrian walkways, as well as invest in repairing and maintaining the existing infrastructure to ensure safety and convenience for all road users.

× No actually most people prefer to go walking and also there are less traffic since my home is located in the dead and alley and secluded neighborhood.

✓ No, actually most people prefer to go walking and also there is less traffic since my home is located in a dead-end alley and secluded neighborhood.

The phrase 'there are less traffic' is incorrect because 'traffic' is an uncountable noun and should be used with 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'dead and alley' is incorrect; it should be 'dead-end alley' to correctly describe the type of alley. Additionally, the article 'a' is needed before 'dead-end alley' to specify one alley.

× No actually most people prefer to go walking and also there are less traffic since my home is located in the dead and alley and secluded neighborhood.

✓ No, actually most people prefer to go walking and also there is less traffic since my home is located in a dead-end alley and a secluded neighborhood.

The preposition 'in' is correct, but the phrase 'dead and alley' is incorrect. It should be 'dead-end alley' as a compound noun. Also, 'secluded neighborhood' needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× No actually most people prefer to go walking and also there are less traffic since my home is located in the dead and alley and secluded neighborhood.

✓ No, actually most people prefer to go walking and also there is less traffic since my home is located in a dead-end alley and a secluded neighborhood.

The quantifier 'less' is used with uncountable nouns, which is correct for 'traffic'. However, the verb agreement must match the singular noun 'traffic' with 'is' instead of 'are'.

× The roads are always are quiet and also peaceful for us.

✓ The roads are always quiet and also peaceful for us.

The sentence contains a redundancy with 'are always are'. Removing the extra 'are' corrects the sentence structure.

× There are some footbridge for people, but they don't use it because they believe that it's time consuming to use this footprint.

✓ There are some footbridges for people, but they don't use them because they believe that it's time-consuming to use these footbridges.

'Footbridge' should be plural 'footbridges' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'footbridges'. 'Footprint' is incorrect; the correct word is 'footbridge'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× There are some footbridge for people, but they don't use it because they believe that it's time consuming to use this footprint.

✓ There are some footbridges for people, but they don't use them because they believe that it's time-consuming to use these footbridges.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'footbridges', so it should be 'them'. Also, 'this footprint' is incorrect; it should be 'these footbridges' to match the plural noun.

× They prefer to cross the road and also it's really convenient for them to go there.

✓ They prefer to cross the road and also find it really convenient to go there.

The phrase 'it's really convenient for them to go there' is awkward. Using 'find it really convenient to go there' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× To answer your question, I believe that is the mayor to add some lanes for bicycles and pedestrian walkway and also they have to repair and maintain the road because they are worn out and they are not reliable and safe for people who use their own vehicles.

✓ To answer your question, I believe that the mayor should add some lanes for bicycles and pedestrian walkways, and also they have to repair and maintain the roads because they are worn out and not reliable or safe for people who use their own vehicles.

The phrase 'that is the mayor to add' is incorrect; it should be 'that the mayor should add'. 'Pedestrian walkway' should be plural 'pedestrian walkways' to match 'lanes'. 'Road' should be plural 'roads' to match the context. Also, 'not reliable and safe' is better expressed as 'not reliable or safe'.

× To answer your question, I believe that is the mayor to add some lanes for bicycles and pedestrian walkway and also they have to repair and maintain the road because they are worn out and they are not reliable and safe for people who use their own vehicles.

✓ To answer your question, I believe that the mayor should add some lanes for bicycles and pedestrian walkways, and also they have to repair and maintain the roads because they are worn out and not reliable or safe for people who use their own vehicles.

'Some lanes' is correct, but 'pedestrian walkway' should be plural 'pedestrian walkways' to agree with 'lanes'. Also, 'road' should be plural 'roads' to match the plural subject.

× So it's really.

✓ So it's really important.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or complement. Adding 'important' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× As I already mentioned, yes actually they need to be improvement and the officials should add some lanes for bicycle and pedestrian walkway and also they should provide infrastructure and also invest money to maintain and repair the existing roads is really important to.

✓ As I already mentioned, yes, actually they need improvement and the officials should add some lanes for bicycles and pedestrian walkways, and also they should provide infrastructure and invest money to maintain and repair the existing roads, which is really important.

'Need to be improvement' is incorrect; it should be 'need improvement'. 'Bicycle' and 'pedestrian walkway' should be plural to agree with 'lanes'. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity. The phrase 'is really important to' is incomplete and corrected to 'which is really important'.